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You (Free verse) by Fire_is_cool When I think,
Of you,
I lose control,
My life is gone,
Everything around me,
Is spinning,
My heart feels free,
I feel like flying,
You may not,
Think this,
Is true,
Just keep in mind,
I will always,
Love you.
Up the ladder:
To Whom I Have Not Long Written
Down the ladder:
Love
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Posted: April 22, 2004 3:44 PM PDT; Last modified: October 25, 2004 8:49 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.552989 Overall Rank: 12666 Comments:
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22-Apr-04/4:11 PM
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Do you mean "daughter of Satan himself"? Sorry, don't get it.
Ominous
This reminds me of another recent post about the child of death:
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
"Child of death" is not the same person as "daughter of satan himself". Satan's daughter is Sin, born fully formed out of his head the moment he began to conspire against Jesus. Satan raped Sin to produce Death, who upon being born immediately raped her as well, begetting all kinds of foul creatures. (PL 1:629-1055)
I canna find this one.
It's "Child of My Buttocks" by -=Dark_Angel=-.
crap - I hope he dinna delete it!
found it - it was actually in my favorites list.
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
I don't know why pasting the link in won't work, but I just do the last five chars.
A gentleman would have used http://tinyurl.com
Makes me wonder who begat pain and/of suffering if death begat this child described (or, as you say - you).
Are your friends pain and suffering?
The daughter is her daughter's child. On it goes. Well done.
If you want to post a new poem, please do so. But when you pose a new poem as a revision of an old poem, the old comments look crazy.
A comma too far.
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