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You (Free verse) by Fire_is_cool

When I think, Of you, I lose control, My life is gone, Everything around me, Is spinning, My heart feels free, I feel like flying, You may not, Think this, Is true, Just keep in mind, I will always, Love you.

Edna Sweetlove 13-Aug-06/5:57 PM
A comma too far.




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