Replying to a comment on:
You
(
Free verse
) by
Fire_is_cool
When I think, Of you, I lose control, My life is gone, Everything around me, Is spinning, My heart feels free, I feel like flying, You may not, Think this, Is true, Just keep in mind, I will always, Love you.
Dovina
25-Oct-04/1:59 PM
If you want to post a new poem, please do so. But when you pose a new poem as a revision of an old poem, the old comments look crazy.
Track and Plan your submissions
;
Read some Comics
;
Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001