Heather Dee
replying on My addict by Heather Dee
11 Sep 2005, 6:19 PM
No, sorry to dissapoint you. So did my poem not even deserve a score?
Courtney Love! Is that you?
I wish I knew what abstractions you were talking about.
"36-24-36
Only if she's 5'3"
A full booty is beautiful.
Lose the fourth stanza and it would rock. By the third everyone reading this know it's about you. You pull it off at the end by making it about Everywoman/child. -7- for now.
For once your summary is accurate. However, the problem is still this: The addressee of the poem disapproves to an extent that would cause me to rage if I were in that circumstance. She, however, is so kind and self-controlled that she does not rage. It’s really that simple.
I can say that those are steps and side effects in reaching the goal of making seeds. Yes, I will say that. We’re talking about purpose and goal here. Strange how the path to a mundane goal sometimes becomes beautiful.
This is just one of your million other identical songs that you've Shift+F7'ed every word of. Newsflash: Big words don't make you not awful. -0-
PS-I'm thinking of naming my next band "Shut Up the Baby". Do you get it?
I liked the poem just not all the spelling errors
I like..............
I can't seem to find the right words to describe what I am feeling after reading this.............Bravo!!!!
I actually like this one. Not that this matters to you. I know that my "teenage like writting style" isn't what you would consider to be of any valute. So I highly doubt you will care to hear sugg. I might have regarding this poem
Wow-u need not say any more
Very nice although I think you could have thought of a better line for "They always want a personal account of Hell"
I REALLY LIKE IT BUT I CANT HELP FEELING LIKE I HAVE READ SOMETHING VERY SIMILAR BEFORE
THIS IS REALLY STRANGE
VERY NICE!!!!
lol nice.
lol funny..