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For you (Other) by Montinequego
For you I give, My heart with love. Which burns and flutters, Like wings on a dove. My soul to keep, In loves tight grasp. Which you have taken, In a single clasp. My love is strong, And very deep. At times it even, Makes me weep. All these I give, For you to take. I am not lying, This is not fake. Please keep them near, And close at hand. I love you much, My dearest friend. Jeramey Gronquist
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Weighted score: 4.7727275
Overall Rank: 11369
Posted: July 21, 2002 5:56 AM PDT; Last modified: July 21, 2002 5:56 AM PDT
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[8] shwenatjadeflower @ 68.12.149.5 | 25-Jul-02/10:43 PM | Reply
lovely *tear*
[2] Tintagiles @ 142.166.234.173 | 13-Sep-04/2:38 PM | Reply
Mediocrity code: 0070C021
[7] Heather Dee @ 4.178.117.131 | 10-Sep-05/11:06 PM | Reply
I REALLY LIKE IT BUT I CANT HELP FEELING LIKE I HAVE READ SOMETHING VERY SIMILAR BEFORE
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