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Moving Out (Free verse) by jessicazee
Iâm tired of flies,
silverfish and smells,
stains, crumbs, balls of hair.
A tub that never drains,
my old T-shirts are dirty rags.
I hardly go barefoot anymore.
Do pillows need washing?
My hands arenât paper towels.
We had feather dusters,
two vacuums, a spray can
that worked, those days together
at the Laundromat next to the Y-Not III
folding sheets and blankets
with four hands are good-byes,
things I broke or spilled
when you would clean up the mess.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.4
Weighted score: 5.166884
Overall Rank: 5010
Posted: September 9, 2005 10:52 PM PDT; Last modified: September 9, 2005 10:52 PM PDT
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