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I Love You (song) (Lyric) by TLRufener
I don’t know how to tell you, What I hold inside my heart. One day you’ll discover it, When we are far apart. I’ll never have the courage, I’ll never find the time; I’ll never know just how to be, Or ask you to be mine. All I know is what I do, So I’ll sing this song for you; Chorus: I would like to tell you how I feel, And I hope you feel the same. I’m not interested in money; I don’t want to play a game. Something deep inside my heart, Tells me that it’s true. I realize I knew all along, That I love you. I’ve tried to hide it from myself, I don’t need any help to see. I took some time, And I’ve thought things through; Now that we’re apart, I know the truth. I know what I’m missing, And it’s you. Chorus They say that absence makes The heart grow fonder, But I can’t wait Any longer. I’ve seen your face, You’ve seen my eyes; I can’t hide forever Behind this disguise. I have to tell you Just how I feel, I have to know, If this is real. Chorus x 2 I won’t wait For another day; I have to say What I want to say. I want you to know that it’s true, That I love you.

Up the ladder: For Sharon too
Down the ladder: self-suffocation

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Arithmetic Mean: 0.6666667
Weighted score: 4.483454
Overall Rank: 12848
Posted: September 7, 2005 7:58 PM PDT; Last modified: September 7, 2005 7:58 PM PDT
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[0] drnick @ 24.176.22.254 | 9-Sep-05/8:05 AM | Reply
Quit ripping off of the Backstreet Boy's material...I mean, I don't blame you-they rock, but it's just not right. I wouldn't write anymore songs if I were you, there's already too much of this boring shit already.
[n/a] TLRufener @ 140.146.216.76 > drnick | 9-Sep-05/11:39 AM | Reply
I wrote this song 5 years, and all I wanted was some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. But I now see that you are unable to think that much. Sorry for making your small mind hurt.
[n/a] zodiac @ 213.186.188.41 > TLRufener | 10-Sep-05/4:37 AM | Reply
UNDENIABLY CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM: Write this song over again about something completely different. Have a topic in mind before you start writing, rather than saying something like 'I think I'll write a song; what are some words people use in songs? Heart, apart, time, mine.' If you need help finding an angle on your new song, consider writing it from the perspective of a budgerigar.
[2] hendrimike @ 69.253.194.186 | 10-Sep-05/2:28 PM | Reply
this would be the longest song ever recorded. also, i don't think that the flow works when you go from: i want you to know that it's true, that i love you.

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