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I Love You (song) (Lyric) by TLRufener

I don’t know how to tell you, What I hold inside my heart. One day you’ll discover it, When we are far apart. I’ll never have the courage, I’ll never find the time; I’ll never know just how to be, Or ask you to be mine. All I know is what I do, So I’ll sing this song for you; Chorus: I would like to tell you how I feel, And I hope you feel the same. I’m not interested in money; I don’t want to play a game. Something deep inside my heart, Tells me that it’s true. I realize I knew all along, That I love you. I’ve tried to hide it from myself, I don’t need any help to see. I took some time, And I’ve thought things through; Now that we’re apart, I know the truth. I know what I’m missing, And it’s you. Chorus They say that absence makes The heart grow fonder, But I can’t wait Any longer. I’ve seen your face, You’ve seen my eyes; I can’t hide forever Behind this disguise. I have to tell you Just how I feel, I have to know, If this is real. Chorus x 2 I won’t wait For another day; I have to say What I want to say. I want you to know that it’s true, That I love you.

zodiac 10-Sep-05/4:37 AM
UNDENIABLY CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM: Write this song over again about something completely different. Have a topic in mind before you start writing, rather than saying something like 'I think I'll write a song; what are some words people use in songs? Heart, apart, time, mine.' If you need help finding an angle on your new song, consider writing it from the perspective of a budgerigar.




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