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This Is For You And You Know Who You Are (Free verse) by cabot
The first time I saw you
I knew you were the one
Whirling in my mind
Hoping for you to be mine
As Days and weeks passed by
I wonât deny that I fell in love with you
But was it love I was feeling
Or was it just an obsession
Now that I look back, I wish I did something right
I wish I didnât say those bad things that one night
I made a mistake and I do anything to take it back
Without you I feel empty and alone.
And from the bottom of my soul
I want you to know that I regret my very past
An empty hole starts to form, from a broken heart that didnât last
Please can you give me just one last chance
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Arithmetic Mean: 0.6666667
Weighted score: 4.483454
Overall Rank: 12853
Posted: October 15, 2005 3:14 PM PDT; Last modified: October 15, 2005 3:14 PM PDT
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