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This Is For You And You Know Who You Are (Free verse) by cabot
The first time I saw you I knew you were the one Whirling in my mind Hoping for you to be mine As Days and weeks passed by I won’t deny that I fell in love with you But was it love I was feeling Or was it just an obsession Now that I look back, I wish I did something right I wish I didn’t say those bad things that one night I made a mistake and I do anything to take it back Without you I feel empty and alone. And from the bottom of my soul I want you to know that I regret my very past An empty hole starts to form, from a broken heart that didn’t last Please can you give me just one last chance

Down the ladder: For Sharon too

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Arithmetic Mean: 0.6666667
Weighted score: 4.483454
Overall Rank: 12846
Posted: October 15, 2005 3:14 PM PDT; Last modified: October 15, 2005 3:14 PM PDT
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