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A Song for the Street (Other) by Numen
What were you thinking when you brought me home? Did you think you could save my soul? What were you thinking when you let me go? Now I guess we'll never know To the body I left in the street I sang this song oh so sweet How did you think I'd react? What was I supposed to do? How'd you think I'd respond? What if I were to do it to you? To the body I left in the street I sang this song oh so sweet You told me of the evil in my heart You thought you could turn me right You told me of the evil in my mind You were a stranger yet so kind To the body I left in the street I sang this song oh so sweet What to do when someone gets uptight When someone tells you that you're all wrong What to do when someone tries to correct And someone tries to tag along Yes, he came in the bar and bought me a drink Things went wrong when he started to think Then he took me home to a roof that leaked But then he started to speak A night of fun became a game It was fun all the same To the body of the religious wrong I sang, so sweet, this song Never tell a man with a loaded gun Where to have his fun Even if it's with another guy Let sleeping dogs lie

Down the ladder: Post-mortem bordem

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.1666665
Weighted score: 5.5827065
Overall Rank: 2367
Posted: May 26, 2004 1:14 AM PDT; Last modified: May 26, 2004 1:14 AM PDT
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[7] Heather Dee @ 4.178.117.131 | 10-Sep-05/11:12 PM | Reply
Wow-u need not say any more
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