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can't you tell me? (Free verse) by hendrimike
my inadequecies in telepathy
deny me the ability
to see how you feel about me
when the time came for you to leave
you told me it was a good night
a kiss on the lips
and my hands on your hips
and life in my sight
days have passed on
and your memory is almost gone
your actions have stung
and i'm almost alone
in a world of my own
what went wrong here?
i thought it was on track
with flowers in our heads
and bodies lying in beds
when will the call come?
when will the call come?
if i could read your mind
i would find i'm not kind
and dancing devils all around
my head is glowing amber
with confusion and anger
at the reasons for no phone sound
it makes me wonder how
how i could do it again
make myself feel lonely
awaiting life in my den
when will the call come?
when will the call come?
dead air...
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Weighted score: 4.970199
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Posted: November 18, 2004 7:55 AM PST; Last modified: November 18, 2004 7:55 AM PST
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