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Im gonna draw a picture w/ a twist (Free verse) by ShelliAnne
Im gonna draw a picture, A picture with a twist. Ill draw it with a razor blade, Ill draw it on my wrist. As I draw this picture, A fountain will appear. And as this fountain flows, My troubles dissappear.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8431
Posted: November 28, 2003 11:44 AM PST; Last modified: November 28, 2003 11:44 AM PST
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[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.116.54 | 28-Nov-03/1:32 PM | Reply
lol. Indeed, as will your relationship with the house cleaner.
[2] Tintagiles @ 198.164.251.10 | 18-Mar-05/6:46 PM | Reply
I feel I must inform you that isn't much of a twist. Lots of people have done it, dear.
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