Re: My Thoughts by amanda_dcosta	Blindpoetry 68.226.178.153	9-Mar-09/4:46 AM
you either know or you don't know.
Re: a comment on brain cookies by nentwined	SupremeDreamer 75.30.177.160	8-Mar-09/8:36 PM
I posted a Shit-Crumpet poem quite some time ago under the penname Shit-Crumpets. http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=75946 But now that you mention it, a remix wouldn't be a bad idea... "Ode to thy flatulence, Oh Delectable Shit-Crumpet!" Not as genius as darkies embrowning, but that hobbled dolt seems to have lost the passion... We're going through withdrawals. What is the ranker without limericks on aids, shit crusted crustaceans, the art of murder, the untying of the gordion knot, remix parodies, and the battle between Christian Angels and Egyptian Gods? I'll pop it out in a few days-- the blade bleeds best when the poetic rapture possesses me. "Ode to thy flatulence, Oh Delectable Shit-Crumpet!" Coming soon to the Ranker!
Re: harvest moon by Caducus	amanda_dcosta 82.178.138.47	8-Mar-09/12:13 AM
Imagery is good, though I believe it picked up pace only by the second half.
Re: Extra Strength VaginexII (Free curse) by Wurt Kale by Shardik	malpaso 70.233.168.141	7-Mar-09/6:40 PM
so it sounds like loss of virginity is a disease and a degradation to some uninformed people like this girl who took the extreme way out....funny as hell, O Bear God!!
Re: a comment on brain cookies by nentwined	nentwined 75.83.196.201	7-Mar-09/3:14 PM
I look forward to your Shit-Crumpet ode with great anticipation!
Re: To my Moneta by Bill Z Bub	SupremeDreamer 75.30.177.160	7-Mar-09/3:09 PM
Heh. How dare you be catchy in order to seduce hallmark cads to offer cash! Tsk. Here's an eight, you hallmark whore!
Re: 9 Things to Eat for Breakfast & Why by A. Nomaly	SupremeDreamer 75.30.177.160	7-Mar-09/3:05 PM
Yeah, I've endured that diet... I suspect my guts will rumble one day in revolt.
Re: brain cookies by nentwined	SupremeDreamer 75.30.177.160	7-Mar-09/3:00 PM
Tsk tsk. Have you ever sampled the delights of a Shit-Crumpet good sir? Its delectable flavour causes one to dismiss entirely all other confections available to the senses-- and of this I can assure you!
Re: for the slaves and the seekers by Bill Z Bub	SupremeDreamer 75.30.177.160	7-Mar-09/2:55 PM
I say we prefer rough'n dirty penetration 'cause it's better than solitary masturbation!
Re: Dream Samurai by Lifeboatman	SupremeDreamer 75.30.177.160	7-Mar-09/2:47 PM
Make it a glass pipe and we got something. Seven.
Re: harvest moon by Caducus	SupremeDreamer 75.30.177.160	7-Mar-09/2:44 PM
Plenty of imagery, esoteric symbolism and word play-- unfortunately crouched in the shadows, vague near to the point of meaninglessness. Seven.
Re: the only thing worse than living (revised, liberated) by Bill Z Bub	SupremeDreamer 75.30.177.160	7-Mar-09/2:37 PM
I lived that moment once before... and many times after. The poem doesn't feel random or lacking to me at all. Then again, I'm perhaps an altogether different breed. Ten.
Re: 2am and sober in the digital age by nentwined	SupremeDreamer 75.30.177.160	7-Mar-09/2:33 PM
I think you should play with it more.. doesn't quite snap-pop like zen. Seven.
Re: the end of the world, c'est soir by Bill Z Bub	SupremeDreamer 75.30.177.160	7-Mar-09/2:29 PM
Robotic spasms! Tsk. Seven.
Re: prove me wrong by nentwined	SupremeDreamer 75.30.177.160	7-Mar-09/2:26 PM
I think the title should be "Pessimism & Projections.". The poem is direct, simple-- lacking perhaps a little creative flare it still possesses the savage spark none-the-less. Eight.
Re: Final Dates, part 1: through gates of smoke and salt by Bill Z Bub	SupremeDreamer 75.30.177.160	7-Mar-09/2:19 PM
"Soon, or much later": Pick either _soon_, or _much later_. It gnaws at me. That aside, it's a exquisite piece that's got a lot of soul and personal depth. Nine.
Re: a comment on Final Dates, part 1: through gates of smoke and salt by Bill Z Bub	Bill Z Bub 99.239.12.102	6-Mar-09/10:28 PM
I don't want to infringe on the privacy of others, and I just realized that my identity here is no longer a mystery. Thus the identity of the "you" in this pome would be rather easy to discover.
Re: Redemption on the mat. by SupremeDreamer	Blindpoetry 68.226.178.153	6-Mar-09/8:07 PM
enjoyed the story.
Re: a comment on Gladly For Love by sliver	sliver 209.248.94.73	6-Mar-09/7:03 PM
too true, thanks for the comment
Re: a comment on Behind Closed Doors by Spirit52	nentwined 75.83.196.201	6-Mar-09/9:22 AM
I think I want to have a hint as to what's being concealed, perhaps--or maybe this is just a comment in general? The more I try to prise apart, though, as redundant, the more everything seems to need to be there... so I don't know, really. :)