Re: a comment on Behind Closed Doors by Spirit52	Spirit52 86.138.133.59	6-Mar-09/8:59 AM
Hi....something more? Could you explain? Thank you for looking and commenting. :o)
Re: Going to Michigan for the weekend by <~>	nentwined 75.83.196.201	6-Mar-09/7:38 AM
That's great. I kind of wish the title was just "someplace to go" or something like...
Re: a comment on Final Dates, part 1: through gates of smoke and salt by Bill Z Bub	nentwined 75.83.196.201	6-Mar-09/7:35 AM
bah, and fie on regret!
Re: Final Dates, part 1: through gates of smoke and salt by Bill Z Bub	Bill Z Bub 99.239.12.102	6-Mar-09/6:09 AM
Deleted second half of this. Now it is incomplete, but then, it IS part one. The story isn't over, is never over until the two old ravens fly free and the the words become meaningless scratches in the clay of our existence.
Re: a comment on Going to Michigan for the weekend by <~>	<~> 167.206.181.179	6-Mar-09/6:02 AM
it's been a long time since i've held a shuttle. and now there's a garden, and hops, lots of hops in michigan, and all else is but a tracing of a memory
Re: Going to Michigan for the weekend by <~>	Bill Z Bub 99.239.12.102	6-Mar-09/5:58 AM
you sweet weaver
Re: Final Dates, part 1: through gates of smoke and salt by Bill Z Bub	Bill Z Bub 99.239.12.102	6-Mar-09/5:41 AM
...aaaaand I now regret posting this. Ah my old friend regret. Never seem able to get rid of you.
Re: a comment on prove me wrong by nentwined	nentwined 75.83.196.201	6-Mar-09/5:07 AM
You should work on everything, of course. All at once! ;)
Re: a comment on 2am and sober in the digital age by nentwined	Blindpoetry 68.226.178.153	6-Mar-09/5:07 AM
LOL. Yes, very strange.
Re: a comment on prove me wrong by nentwined	Blindpoetry 68.226.178.153	6-Mar-09/5:06 AM
haha A tale, it does feel like. Not sure I could convey what I'd want to say in a poem. I'm afraid my poetic side has suffered since... my last few poems I've written. lol I really should work on that, shouldn't I?
Re: a comment on 2am and sober in the digital age by nentwined	nentwined 75.83.196.201	6-Mar-09/4:54 AM
When corporations die, which, while they _can_ be more long-lived than "people", ... does happen. Strange strange world when all the world's journals are in one man's house.
Re: a comment on prove me wrong by nentwined	nentwined 75.83.196.201	6-Mar-09/4:42 AM
Thanks :D One of these days, we will see, we will see. It's amazing this place has been here this long. You probably have more certainty than you realize (he says, older and wiser *cough* sure....) Innocence to the world gone a few months ago? Now that sounds like a tale. Or a poem. ;) Hopefully not a pimple :)
Re: a comment on 2am and sober in the digital age by nentwined	Blindpoetry 68.226.178.153	6-Mar-09/4:26 AM
I've thought exactly the same! Pretty often, actually. And when do websites decide to call it quits? LJ, Myspace? Facebook? Holders of a million and one memories? Photos, journals, friendships?
Re: prove me wrong by nentwined	Blindpoetry 68.226.178.153	6-Mar-09/4:18 AM
I liked the title, "Prove Me Wrong" lol I'd love to prove you wrong. One of these days. I'll come back and be all like... well, we'll see. ;) Actually: I've never had certainty much. And innocence to the world went gone after a few months ago. hm... I like how it's a list. And every last line goes together. :)
Re: a comment on Fake, Emo and Over Shaven by Blindpoetry	nentwined 75.83.196.201	6-Mar-09/4:13 AM
:hehe: You've got all the time in the world to improve it ;)
Re: a comment on Fake, Emo and Over Shaven by Blindpoetry	Blindpoetry 68.226.178.153	6-Mar-09/4:10 AM
ah, okay. xD Diplome = create, make, go for. Something like that. Did I make that word up? I think I did... haha oh well. "Diplome yourself to bad luck" was meant to sort of say "you create all the bad things that happen to you and magnify it like it's the worst thing in the world." ... heh Something like that. The last line was the reason I wrote it. :) Too bad the rest of the poem doesn't match up to it. lol
Re: a comment on Fake, Emo and Over Shaven by Blindpoetry	nentwined 75.83.196.201	6-Mar-09/3:57 AM
I lump pimples and pimples-making-fun-of-pimples together :) Still, though, what's Diplome? :) I liked "bleed with red dye" :)
Re: a comment on Fake, Emo and Over Shaven by Blindpoetry	Blindpoetry 68.226.178.153	6-Mar-09/3:55 AM
spell check probably didn't work for me at the time. Who knows. I meant soothe. It's not a pimple because I remember the intention of this poem was to make fun of pimple. "Bleed with red dye" was supposed to say something like most emo kids crazy 'suffering' was their imagination and fake.
Re: a comment on Final Dates, part 1: through gates of smoke and salt by Bill Z Bub	nentwined 75.83.196.201	5-Mar-09/11:25 PM
:heh: Not that there's anything wrong with that, so long as, you know, "safe and sane". But I didn't actually pick up on that in this, so maybe others won't, as well. :)
Re: a comment on Final Dates, part 1: through gates of smoke and salt by Bill Z Bub	Bill Z Bub 99.239.12.102	5-Mar-09/11:09 PM
should say "in this poem or in any actual events inspiring it". Not that there's anything wrong with that.