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Behind Closed Doors (Senryu) by Spirit52 Evening has settled
Curtains drawn against the night
Lives concealed once more
Up the ladder:
Again with the venting
Down the ladder:
Ode to the Potato
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Posted: December 20, 2008 1:45 PM PST; Last modified: December 20, 2008 1:45 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.1185646 Overall Rank: 5957 Comments:
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nentwined @ 75.83.196.201
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5-Mar-09/10:55 PM
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needs something more, I think.
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Spirit52 @ 86.138.133.59
> nentwined
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6-Mar-09/8:59 AM
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Hi....something more? Could you explain? Thank you for looking and commenting. :o)
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nentwined @ 75.83.196.201
> Spirit52
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6-Mar-09/9:22 AM
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I think I want to have a hint as to what's being concealed, perhaps--or maybe this is just a comment in general? The more I try to prise apart, though, as redundant, the more everything seems to need to be there... so I don't know, really. :)
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