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Behind Closed Doors

by Spirit52

Member since 2008 · Posted 20 Dec 2008 · 3 comments

Evening has settled Curtains drawn against the night Lives concealed once more

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[6] nentwined 5-Mar-09/10:55 PM Reply
needs something more, I think.
[n/a] Spirit52 › nentwined 6-Mar-09/8:59 AM Reply
Hi....something more? Could you explain? Thank you for looking and commenting. :o)
[6] nentwined › Spirit52 6-Mar-09/9:22 AM Reply
I think I want to have a hint as to what's being concealed, perhaps--or maybe this is just a comment in general? The more I try to prise apart, though, as redundant, the more everything seems to need to be there... so I don't know, really. :)