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Behind Closed Doors (Senryu) by Spirit52
Evening has settled Curtains drawn against the night Lives concealed once more

Down the ladder: Phoenix

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.5
Weighted score: 5.1185646
Overall Rank: 5952
Posted: December 20, 2008 1:45 PM PST; Last modified: December 20, 2008 1:45 PM PST
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[6] nentwined @ 75.83.196.201 | 5-Mar-09/10:55 PM | Reply
needs something more, I think.
[n/a] Spirit52 @ 86.138.133.59 > nentwined | 6-Mar-09/8:59 AM | Reply
Hi....something more? Could you explain? Thank you for looking and commenting. :o)
[6] nentwined @ 75.83.196.201 > Spirit52 | 6-Mar-09/9:22 AM | Reply
I think I want to have a hint as to what's being concealed, perhaps--or maybe this is just a comment in general? The more I try to prise apart, though, as redundant, the more everything seems to need to be there... so I don't know, really. :)
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