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Behind Closed Doors (Senryu) by Spirit52

Evening has settled Curtains drawn against the night Lives concealed once more

nentwined 6-Mar-09/9:22 AM
I think I want to have a hint as to what's being concealed, perhaps--or maybe this is just a comment in general? The more I try to prise apart, though, as redundant, the more everything seems to need to be there... so I don't know, really. :)




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