poemranker ::Fake, Emo and Over Shaven by Blindpoetry

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Fake, Emo and Over Shaven

Member since 2003 · Posted 9 May 2006 · 6 comments

Sooth your emotions And cry cry cry Diplome yourself to bad luck And bleed with red dye

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[8] Ranger 10-May-06/1:36 PM Reply
Entertaining, not much more to be said about this one.
[7] nentwined 5-Mar-09/10:16 PM Reply
"soothe" your emotions, unless you truly mean sooth--which would mean to imply you're prognosticating, some. tracking biorhythms?

You've lost me with "diplome" though.

Doesn't quite hang together. But I appreciate what you're doing.

Shouldn't it be a pimple, though?
[n/a] Blindpoetry › nentwined 6-Mar-09/3:55 AM Reply
spell check probably didn't work for me at the time. Who knows. I meant soothe.

It's not a pimple because I remember the intention of this poem was to make fun of pimple. "Bleed with red dye" was supposed to say something like most emo kids crazy 'suffering' was their imagination and fake.
[7] nentwined › Blindpoetry 6-Mar-09/3:57 AM Reply
I lump pimples and pimples-making-fun-of-pimples together :)

Still, though, what's Diplome? :)

I liked "bleed with red dye" :)
[n/a] Blindpoetry › nentwined 6-Mar-09/4:10 AM Reply
ah, okay. xD

Diplome = create, make, go for. Something like that. Did I make that word up? I think I did... haha oh well.

"Diplome yourself to bad luck" was meant to sort of say "you create all the bad things that happen to you and magnify it like it's the worst thing in the world." ... heh Something like that.

The last line was the reason I wrote it. :) Too bad the rest of the poem doesn't match up to it. lol
[7] nentwined › Blindpoetry 6-Mar-09/4:13 AM Reply
:hehe: You've got all the time in the world to improve it ;)