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Fake, Emo and Over Shaven (Free verse) by Blindpoetry Sooth your emotions
And cry cry cry
Diplome yourself to bad luck
And bleed with red dye
Up the ladder:
Vulture
Down the ladder:
starry
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Posted: May 9, 2006 3:41 PM PDT; Last modified: May 9, 2006 3:41 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.029801 Overall Rank: 7360 Comments:
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Ranger @ 62.252.32.15
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10-May-06/1:36 PM
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Entertaining, not much more to be said about this one.
"soothe" your emotions, unless you truly mean sooth--which would mean to imply you're prognosticating, some. tracking biorhythms?
You've lost me with "diplome" though. Doesn't quite hang together. But I appreciate what you're doing. Shouldn't it be a pimple, though?
spell check probably didn't work for me at the time. Who knows. I meant soothe.
It's not a pimple because I remember the intention of this poem was to make fun of pimple. "Bleed with red dye" was supposed to say something like most emo kids crazy 'suffering' was their imagination and fake.
I lump pimples and pimples-making-fun-of-pimples together :)
Still, though, what's Diplome? :) I liked "bleed with red dye" :)
ah, okay. xD
Diplome = create, make, go for. Something like that. Did I make that word up? I think I did... haha oh well. "Diplome yourself to bad luck" was meant to sort of say "you create all the bad things that happen to you and magnify it like it's the worst thing in the world." ... heh Something like that. The last line was the reason I wrote it. :) Too bad the rest of the poem doesn't match up to it. lol
:hehe: You've got all the time in the world to improve it ;)
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