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The Path (Free verse) by hummers86
My walk unsure
The road not right,
The truth so near
It is in sight
The path not easy
But one I must take,
Pressures increasing
When will I break?
The world so crass
The world so dire,
My life will pass
With one desire
Through thick and thin
I must persevere,
He took me in
When love was not near
His sight is my hope
My truth and my life,
How could I cope?
If I did not stride
When all is gone
And life has fled,
Ill count my wrongs
And bow my head
The path I chose
The one thatâs right,
For the one who rose
That dreary night
Though some thought it queer
The decision I made,
When during that year
I called for his aid
Persistence a must
Best effort put forth
Then passing his test
I reveal my self worth
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.029801
Overall Rank: 7365
Posted: November 22, 2003 1:38 PM PST; Last modified: November 22, 2003 1:38 PM PST
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