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cacoon (Free verse) by whispern_smoke_wisp
I feel like I should be wrapped in
a white silk cacoon,
for a year.
Trapped by myself with nothing,
but my mind and white silk,
to entertain my thoughts.
the pureness that surrounds me
will become me
easing all my evil thoughts away.
And when I step out blinking into
the warm afternoon light
365 days later,
my large
and delicate
wings
will carry
me to the sun.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.029801
Overall Rank: 7349
Posted: April 2, 2005 10:01 AM PST; Last modified: April 2, 2005 10:01 AM PST
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