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Dream Samurai (Free verse) by Lifeboatman
My honor rests on a dream Made of a plastic blue pipe And I sulk on a glory that never was In a shady corner of my home Spitting nicotine while I don My hero's cloth of ragged shirt I am not even king of this festered ignominy And as I hide from them my truth With courteous gestures of sanity And talks of school, future and stability I am slowly dying alive inside

Up the ladder: Residue of a Marriage
Down the ladder: The Project

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.071139
Overall Rank: 6619
Posted: March 3, 2009 6:27 AM PST; Last modified: March 3, 2009 6:27 AM PST
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[6] nentwined @ 75.83.196.201 | 5-Mar-09/9:54 PM | Reply
huh?

Hmm. Makes more sense when I notice the title--but I'm still lost with a plastic blue pipe.
[n/a] Lifeboatman @ 124.106.53.170 > nentwined | 10-Mar-09/6:58 PM | Reply
Think PVC, think long...
[6] nentwined @ 75.83.196.201 > Lifeboatman | 10-Mar-09/7:05 PM | Reply
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I see. :) It all makes a lot more sense now.
[7] SupremeDreamer @ 75.30.177.160 | 7-Mar-09/2:47 PM | Reply
Make it a glass pipe and we got something. Seven.
[n/a] Lifeboatman @ 124.106.53.170 > SupremeDreamer | 10-Mar-09/6:57 PM | Reply
SO you still show yourself around these parts... I wrote this about a decade ago, and my my bong was makeshift from 1.5 Coke bottles. hehehe
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