Free verse № 156555
harvest moon
Screams from the Shanty town,
locust fog knells in audio horizon.
Wheat bent like chaff bearers
gnawed to origin and silica.
In dust bowl dress hems
A farmer spills blood beads
from elders wrists
chanting at sky to cut rain.
A shadow walker shimmers
she carries a pail of locusts
their eyes like garnets on a pyre ring.
These fallen winged scythes
are ground down by peasant teeth
and washed down by rain prayer.
Tomorrow the elders kill a newborn
with bark from the Acacia,
a handful of seed and with God's grace
a harvest moon.
3 comments
I want more punctuation (elders' wrists? or?)
You've got some good stuff inter-woven, and I even see the thread--the thread seems solid; but I think you need to work on your stitching? a 7, but I think it could be a 9 or a 10.
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