Re: A Prayer For God's Soldiers As They Kill For Him by Edna Sweetlove	wilco 24.92.74.122	22-May-06/8:34 PM
WOW! You ARE the most talented person on here! Are you George Bush?
Re: The balls of Thor by John Rambo	wilco 24.92.74.122	22-May-06/8:30 PM
eh...
Re: Urinating in the alley by John Rambo	wilco 24.92.74.122	22-May-06/8:29 PM
nope...but a 2 just for being a sick bastard.
Re: San Franscisco by John Rambo	wilco 24.92.74.122	22-May-06/8:28 PM
That's funny
Re: Descendent by MacFrantic	wilco 24.92.74.122	22-May-06/8:26 PM
Damn, that's a lot of rhyming...I hate that, but I guess I like it well enough for the words themselves.
Re: Godproof Hat by Dovina	wilco 24.92.74.122	22-May-06/8:24 PM
I wish I had a God-proof hat. I always feel like He's watching me. Nice limerick. On an unrelated topic, I'm ure glad I came back in time to see the return of Rockmage.
Re: test by zanzina	MacFrantic 172.192.78.137	21-May-06/11:58 PM
Word choice 8 Effort 1 Effect 3 Average *4*
Re: A Sexy Crucifixion Poem by Edna Sweetlove	horus8 24.126.112.227	21-May-06/10:38 PM
Yes, the palestinian sun is so much more yellow than the kike one. You are aware. even smoking that pulsing pale bananna like a heady hippie looking for a queerly biblical retreat.
Re: A Prayer For God's Soldiers As They Kill For Him by Edna Sweetlove	horus8 24.126.112.227	21-May-06/10:36 PM
You must get bored without legs riding that portable caddy you call a carreer.
Re: Peeping Through The Window by Edna Sweetlove	horus8 24.126.112.227	21-May-06/10:34 PM
Christ, that was a piping hot plate full of rope trajectory.
Re: Descartes' Immortal Truth by Edna Sweetlove	horus8 24.126.112.227	21-May-06/10:34 PM
Yes, you are, ah har dee har har... but being so quick with your ass you should have noticed the pass that the sporitely priest made Upon your gay parade you're hardly gay, but a fan.
Re: Godproof Hat by Dovina	Sunny 66.69.36.222	21-May-06/6:14 PM
Well done limerick. I think the Buddhiistic choice is a bit of a confusion, to me at least, not speculating you are speaking of Christianity at all due to the low caps, but I still don't know where it came from. I loved the second stanza due to your raw imagery, but I have to say (and I am fully aware you are you might very well be more wise than I in this poetic world, but...) I don't think this well done poem should be composed as a limerick. Free verse. Limericks are for the jolly's. That is not the tone I got from this, just my opinion. Overall, very impressive. Powerful. ~Sunny
Re: Tattered by VintageLove08	Sunny 66.69.36.171	21-May-06/5:53 PM
This poem obviously carries much emotion with it...which you can do a lot with. I think you managed to pinpoint a lot of emotion dead-on, if you will, but there were a few things I wanted to point out to you: -L2: "paper cuts"?? -L5: Nice -L10: I didn't understand how malaise could be a friend?? -Last line: I thought you could end with more emotion, more grasp on the heart of your theme, in my personal opinion. ~Sunny
Re: a comment on Still Air Sticks by Sunny	Sunny 66.69.36.171	21-May-06/5:30 PM
Dearest 'Sweetlove', Enlighten elsewhere with your brilliance, not here. ~Sunny
Re: Portofino by wEdible Underpantsw	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.123.42	21-May-06/4:51 PM
Very fine and wondrous. But a bit bollocky.
Re: The Ballad of Fraser Allonby Q.C., Barrister-At-Law by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.123.42	21-May-06/4:49 PM
Quite OK I suppose.
Re: actually chicken and mushroom pies are nice too by cav	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.123.42	21-May-06/4:46 PM
Excellent. I loathe Scotch eggs but like their shape. However on a technical point: they are not testicle shaped (unless your experience with nuts is more limited than mine). Which I doubt. Do try my own tasty bollocky poems.
Re: The balls of Thor by John Rambo	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.123.42	21-May-06/4:43 PM
I made a typo in my comment. I meant "talented".
Re: The balls of Thor by John Rambo	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.123.42	21-May-06/4:42 PM
Not as good as your vulgar poems but literate an interesting. It seems we two are tye most telanted people here so I bid you welcome. Have you tried www.allpoetry.com? You would be a good addition there too. Remember to read all my poems or a fate worse than death may overtake you.
Re: San Franscisco by John Rambo	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.123.42	21-May-06/4:40 PM
The standard of limerick-writing here is f*cking abysmal, yet this is not at all bad. Not excellent (see my own wondrous limericks) but good. I would give it 10 except I haven't the faintest idea what "spooge" means. I suppose I could google it but why waste my time? Do you mean splooge? Or spunk?