Edible Underpants is a recipient of the poemWanker award: Likes to create fake accounts pretending to be other users. Portofino (Free verse) by wEdible Underpantsw
Promise me you will not forget Portofino.
Promise me you will find the trompe l'oeil
on the bedroom walls at the Splendido.
The walls make a scene you cannot enter.
Perhaps then you will comprehend this longing
for permanence I often mentioned to you.
Across the harbor? A yellow church. A cliff.
Promise me you will witness the day diminish.
And when the roofs darken, when the stars drift
until they shatter on the sea's finish,
you will know what I told you is true
when I said abandonment is beautiful.
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Posted: April 29, 2004 8:58 AM PDT; Last modified: April 29, 2004 8:58 AM PDT
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