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Free verse № 99484

Portofino

Member since 2003 · Posted 29 Apr 2004 · 1 comment

Promise me you will not forget Portofino. Promise me you will find the trompe l'oeil on the bedroom walls at the Splendido. The walls make a scene you cannot enter. Perhaps then you will comprehend this longing for permanence I often mentioned to you. Across the harbor? A yellow church. A cliff. Promise me you will witness the day diminish. And when the roofs darken, when the stars drift until they shatter on the sea's finish, you will know what I told you is true when I said abandonment is beautiful.

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[9] Edna Sweetlove 21-May-06/4:51 PM Reply
Very fine and wondrous. But a bit bollocky.