Re: a comment on Normality by colbaby	colbaby 220.233.180.7	24-Sep-06/4:20 AM
Typos! Word 12 in line 2 should read 'cunt'.
Re: a comment on The Dovina Memorial Bike Lane by Dovina	Ranger 86.145.25.247	24-Sep-06/4:15 AM
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Re: a comment on Weather poem part 6: idols by nypoet22	nypoet22 65.10.92.48	24-Sep-06/1:20 AM
funny but i had the exact same thought, that this segment was probably a little over the top. but it's also the type of thing that's very hard to edit without disturbing the flow of it.
Re: a comment on Weather poem part 6: idols by nypoet22	nypoet22 65.10.92.48	24-Sep-06/1:11 AM
ni hau, zhong-guo
Re: Desolation by Beyond_Dreams	PoeticJustice 71.227.225.16	24-Sep-06/12:18 AM
I really like it. :D
Re: a comment on when enough is too much by elderking	elderking 172.190.53.151	24-Sep-06/12:02 AM
heard of them. my keyboard has issues when it comes to capitalization; apparently so do you.
Re: a comment on Attention, This Just In by thepinkbunnyofdoom	thepinkbunnyofdoom 208.102.3.141	23-Sep-06/9:01 PM
The defintion of an iliterate is someone 1 : having little or no education; especially : unable to read or write Obviously I can read and write 2 a : showing or marked by a lack of familiarity with language and literature <an illiterate magazine> b : violating approved patterns of speaking or writing My vocabulary is fine. Considering that this is poetry, approved patterns don't really mean fuck. 3 : showing or marked by a lack of acquaintance with the fundamentals of a particular field of knowledge <musically illiterate> You might have me on three, if you include the larger body of everything I've ever written. However, whether or not I'm an illiterate or not doesn't change one fact. You are a Bitch. So please, do the world a favor, and go choke yourself on a big black sweaty aids infested penis. Your also stupid. A rational person would think, "oh god no, he wrote another one" and merely skipped over my submission, if they truly hated what I wrote so badly. You apparently lack the brains to do this. Making you a Stupid Bitch. Have a nice day Edna I look forward to hearing from you <3 Jason
Re: Fun At The Gynaecologists by Edna Sweetlove	dvincent 71.109.114.41	23-Sep-06/8:23 PM
Hello Edna, I'm going to say this once so I hope you'll pay close attention. What you attempt to pass off on this site as poetry is actually prose written in columns and stanzas -- and pretty silly, sloppy prose at that. You have the mistaken idea, like quite a few young, green, imature "poets," that shocking language and "cutesy" ideas are somehow synonomous with poetry. In your case, however, it's not just bad writing. That I could put up with, given your obviously "new student" level of writing. In your case, it's arrogance as well, and that I have a very hard time overlooking. Not only does it make you look foolish as a person, it makes your work even more silly and unprofessional. Take my word for it. You don't write good poetry. And the "poets" on this or any other site who seem to think you do, are as green and cluelss as you. My suggestion? Drop the "Muse Queen" facade and take a good hard look at yourself and what you're doing (or, rather, trying to do). Then, if you're really serious about the craft, take a few lessons in modesty, find a mentor and study hard, write alot, and set about REALLY learning how to create good poetry. Good luck!
Re: Shadows In Your Eyes by PoeticJustice	PoeticJustice 71.227.225.16	23-Sep-06/7:30 PM
You guys are so mean. I wrote out these feelings and all you care about is the way it reads. But looking from the last 20 comments about all poems, everyone on this site is mean. I could go through everyone elses poems and call their thoughts and feelings badly written and sound smart and clever, but what about the persons feelings that you just hurt from saying things like that when they are trying to get things out there for the world to see and hoping someone will understand? You should all think before you mouth off.
Re: a comment on The Christian Soldier by Sing4Jesus!	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.243.148	23-Sep-06/7:23 PM
You sound pretty dim.
Re: a comment on Edna's Lovely World Cup Poem by Edna Sweetlove	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.243.148	23-Sep-06/7:22 PM
Piss off, idiot foreskin licker.
Re: SLIM JIM by PodPoet	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.243.148	23-Sep-06/7:21 PM
Illiterate and unamusing. I have read better things in a fortune "cookie".
Re: Rain by flock	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.243.148	23-Sep-06/7:20 PM
Pitifully poor.
Re: I Have, Because I Am by flock	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.243.148	23-Sep-06/7:20 PM
Very funny; but deadly boring.
Re: In the hollow (rough) by ecargo	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.243.148	23-Sep-06/7:19 PM
What sort of word is "pricker", sweetie? The rest shows promise.
Re: if really its me by Landon2	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.243.148	23-Sep-06/7:16 PM
Illiterate garbage.
Re: Weather poem part 6: idols by nypoet22	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.243.148	23-Sep-06/7:15 PM
If this is poetry, I'm a Chinaman.
Re: when enough is too much by elderking	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.243.148	23-Sep-06/7:15 PM
Have you heard of capital letters?
Re: Farmhouse, Southern France (storm on arrival) by Ranger	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.243.148	23-Sep-06/7:14 PM
I fell asleep after stanza #1.
Re: Soup Can by oneglove	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.243.148	23-Sep-06/7:13 PM
Pretty boring.