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Rain

by flock

Member since 2006 · Posted 20 Sep 2006 · 3 comments

Rain drips, tapping on plastic, snapping elastic, rain drops. Water flows, carrying things, tarrying rings, water goes. Warm in bed, hearing the weather, fearing whatever, enough said.

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3 comments

[8] Ranger 20-Sep-06/12:14 PM Reply
Nice.
[10] nightowl 21-Sep-06/1:31 AM Reply
I feel it. x
[2] Edna Sweetlove 23-Sep-06/7:20 PM Reply
Pitifully poor.