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Rain (Free verse) by flock
Rain drips, tapping on plastic, snapping elastic, rain drops. Water flows, carrying things, tarrying rings, water goes. Warm in bed, hearing the weather, fearing whatever, enough said.

Up the ladder: What I Wouldn't Give
Down the ladder: All Alone

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7782
Posted: September 20, 2006 9:59 AM PDT; Last modified: September 20, 2006 9:59 AM PDT
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Comments:
[8] Ranger @ 81.158.79.172 | 20-Sep-06/12:14 PM | Reply
Nice.
[10] nightowl @ 198.54.202.226 | 21-Sep-06/1:31 AM | Reply
I feel it. x
[2] Edna Sweetlove @ 85.210.243.148 | 23-Sep-06/7:20 PM | Reply
Pitifully poor.
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