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Land of Promises (Free verse) by jasondingus
I held your heart, You held my hand, Now lead me on, To the promise land, Promise me, You will always stay, Promise me, You will never go away, In your life, my future did lie, But to the land of promises, I must now cry, What was once upon a time, Now is only make-believe, What was written in the stars, Now is etched in my memory, Take my heart, and take my hand, But lead me into the promise land, I trusted you like no one before, And in your land of promises, I will walk no more!

Up the ladder: Play ball he said
Down the ladder: she sits back and judges me

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7779
Posted: January 25, 2004 3:18 PM PST; Last modified: January 25, 2004 3:28 PM PST
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