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Free verse № 80706

Land of Promises

Member since 2003 · Posted 25 Jan 2004 · Edited 25 Jan 2004 · 0 comments

I held your heart, You held my hand, Now lead me on, To the promise land, Promise me, You will always stay, Promise me, You will never go away, In your life, my future did lie, But to the land of promises, I must now cry, What was once upon a time, Now is only make-believe, What was written in the stars, Now is etched in my memory, Take my heart, and take my hand, But lead me into the promise land, I trusted you like no one before, And in your land of promises, I will walk no more!

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