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Inoperative Head Mechanism (Free verse) by D. $ Fontera When they've surely said it all
About how you never
Ever
Ever
Speak your mind
Tell them that yours
Isn't nearly so close
To your tongue
Up the ladder:
Crystal Lane Swift
Down the ladder:
Hiraeth
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Posted: February 3, 2006 9:55 PM PST; Last modified: February 3, 2006 9:55 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7769 Comments:
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Dovina @ 67.72.98.100
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4-Feb-06/8:01 AM
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Funny. The first line is wordy.
Yes, the thinker's comeback. Nice sharp ending.
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