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Weather poem part 6: idols (Other) by nypoet22
everyone mentions the weather
because it is something
noticed and valued.
whether or not you care
that the rain sweeps birdshit off your car,
that sunlight smiles on the morning dew,
warms your hair to the touch,
hugs the sky tight enough
to turn her blue,
you live within the world,
create your own heat just
as your mother's heat once created you.
weather is the scene that holds god's art,
a poem painted bright against the stars
and stronger stuff than any man would dare eschew.
creation in her purest form,
distilled each day and poured
into your parking space,
comes to tell you there is more
than just your normal run from place to place,
available from any direction you might care to view.
poor artist, no matter how great
or near-immortal works your poor imagination
might capture from the ether
of a moment long enough to create,
you will never equal the weather. nor,
one might suppose, would any sane daughter or son
(not to say that any artist worth a fraction
of a cent would be sane)
want such attention. who could imagine
what words might spit from the lips of strangers
if upon every storm to rock the storm windows,
every stroke of sunlight's fingers on the waves,
every soft moon wrapped in a shawl of clouds,
every angry chill carried on the broad shoulders
of the wind, everyone should mention - you?
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Posted: September 21, 2006 1:16 PM PDT; Last modified: September 21, 2006 1:16 PM PDT
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