Re: The Hunter, the Hunted, and the Bystander by Dovina	INTRANSIT 152.163.100.6	3-Nov-06/6:31 AM
I'd like to know what this assholes problem is. (the driver of the car) And it's too wordy for my tastes. This one could do away with the formal stanzas. Say, what other poetry sites are y'all using these days? What is working for who and why.
Re: Tony Blair's sagging purple johnny by Stephen Robins	Engelbert Humpalot 85.210.249.88	3-Nov-06/5:22 AM
Who's VioletSuede, Stevie?
Re: Don't touch the chairs in a gay bar. by Stephen Robins	Engelbert Humpalot 85.210.249.88	3-Nov-06/5:17 AM
This is excellent. Why was his stool hanging out? Had you answered that I would say 10/10. As it is it has to be an 8/10.
Re: James The Dashing Pirate by thepinkbunnyofdoom	Engelbert Humpalot 85.210.249.88	3-Nov-06/5:15 AM
Puerile.
Re: Jesus Around Your Neck (Final Version) by Wakeboarder20	Engelbert Humpalot 85.210.249.88	3-Nov-06/5:14 AM
I am pleased I missed the previous version(s) - they must have sucked bigtime!
Re: a comment on Ash by horus8	Engelbert Humpalot 85.210.249.88	3-Nov-06/5:12 AM
I forgot to add: Lots of spelling errors in so short a space is clever I suppose.
Re: Ash by horus8	Engelbert Humpalot 85.210.249.88	3-Nov-06/5:11 AM
Badly punctuated. Badly written. Crap in short.
Re: Cool In The Army by wilco	Engelbert Humpalot 85.210.249.88	3-Nov-06/5:10 AM
Yes, anyone who joins the army is dumb and deserves to get put into a body bag.
Re: The 80's by wilco	Engelbert Humpalot 85.210.249.88	3-Nov-06/5:09 AM
Not at all bad. Maybe move to a better neighbourhood (If you can afford it).
Re: Going Away to Fight a War by wilco	Engelbert Humpalot 85.210.249.88	3-Nov-06/5:08 AM
Boring tripe. Learn the difference between ITS and IT'S before writing anything again.
Re: a comment on The Willy Poem by Engelbert Humpalot	Engelbert Humpalot 85.210.249.88	3-Nov-06/5:06 AM
So why don't you?
Re: Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove	Engelbert Humpalot 85.210.249.88	3-Nov-06/5:04 AM
Right on, Edna. I get pissed off with all these namby-pambies rabbiting on about drinking and driving. Most accidents are caused by unlicensed yobs (often Afros) who can't drive and who have no insurance (mainly becaused the car has been stolen).
Re: a comment on Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove	Engelbert Humpalot 85.210.249.88	3-Nov-06/5:02 AM
This comment seems to have been posted in the wrong poem. I can see no references to teeth at all in this nice poem. Maybe you were pissed at the time, Wilco me old fart.
Re: a comment on Blue, Black & White by oneglove	oneglove 24.216.70.145	2-Nov-06/10:34 PM
are you saying the poem doesn't make sense? Perhaps you don't understand the poem, but believe me it makes sense. If you're struggling to tie things together the last two lines should help.
Re: The Pit’s Bottom by Dovina	wilco 24.92.74.122	2-Nov-06/6:45 PM
You know I don't like these poems that are oozing Jesus all over me...so you'll forgive me if I hold my vote.
Re: Blue, Black & White by oneglove	wilco 24.92.74.122	2-Nov-06/6:40 PM
The Blues Highway...drive it every day. Yeah, I'd call this a lyric..it reads like one and as a free verse I'd probably only give it a 5...but as a lyric it's an 8. Doesn't make sense? Sorry.
Re: a comment on Fare Price (Final Version) by Wakeboarder20	wilco 24.92.74.122	2-Nov-06/6:33 PM
I'll never understand all these poverty stricken people giving all the money they can to the church so their pastor can drive a Lexus. Sad.
Re: Jesus Around Your Neck (Final Version) by Wakeboarder20	wilco 24.92.74.122	2-Nov-06/6:31 PM
You know what the bad thing about something like this is that you're condemning the condemners ;) I agree with your thought here but when you're lambasting someone like this, you're really just mirroring the way they are.
Re: 311006 txt to russia by daniella	wilco 24.92.74.122	2-Nov-06/6:27 PM
I like this except for the title.
Re: a comment on Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove	wilco 24.92.74.122	2-Nov-06/6:22 PM
I suppose we should sit around drinking tea and not brushing our teeth and just let any old ass-hat dictator do whatever he wants. Tell you what: Next time someone invades your pussy little country, we'll just let them enslave you and rape your people and have a jolly-good time. And it's going to happen sooner or later.