Re: a comment on Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove	Ranger 62.252.32.15	4-Nov-06/8:43 AM
Edna only posts the racist remarks as bait - the way Dark Angel used to, but without the style, wit, humour and intellect. Hence why you guys are the barbarians and the Iraqis are all adorable, childlike rogues.
Re: For Elizabeth, Wherever She May Be by wilco	Ranger 62.252.32.15	4-Nov-06/8:28 AM
Reads well, sounds better :-)
Re: a comment on Monsters by wilco	Ranger 62.252.32.15	4-Nov-06/8:27 AM
For ages your music player on myspace didn't work - it finally did yesterday :-D It sounds awesome! I don't suppose you're likely to play over here, are you?
Re: Left the key in dream den's door by capachijim	InWonderLand 66.214.227.170	3-Nov-06/8:11 PM
i LIKE THIS SHIT ALOT!
Re: a comment on Blue, Black & White by oneglove	oneglove 128.252.156.152	3-Nov-06/1:51 PM
By no means do I think you're stupid, I was just trying to clarify what you said. And I agree that it has the meter of a song, but I am no musician so that's why I labeled it a free verse. I hope you take advantage of any blues you find along 61
Re: a comment on The Hunter, the Hunted, and the Bystander by Dovina	Dovina 70.38.78.229	3-Nov-06/1:34 PM
No, it's from a dream.
Re: a comment on The Hunter, the Hunted, and the Bystander by Dovina	Dovina 70.38.78.229	3-Nov-06/1:33 PM
When you do, drop a line.
Re: a comment on The Hunter, the Hunted, and the Bystander by Dovina	Dovina 70.38.78.229	3-Nov-06/1:32 PM
Yeah, the tiger’s mouth is vicious, but not quite right. But then, that boulder from Raiders of the Lost Ark that almost ran over Indiana Jones, isn’t either. The silence was, in fact, guilty, but I suppose it goes without saying.
Re: a comment on Blue, Black & White by oneglove	wilco 24.92.74.122	3-Nov-06/1:26 PM
I understand the poem. I'm not stupid. I was saying that giving it a different score simply because it's in one category and not the other might not make sense.
Re: a comment on Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove	wilco 24.92.74.122	3-Nov-06/1:22 PM
We'll see. Really and truly it was a swipe at the ignorant fuck above talking about "murderous troops". I get so tired of people lambasting the American troops for being over there. If you don't like Bush and the war, fine (I don't either), but don't talk shit about those kids who are dying for you.
Re: heyyyyyy alligator by hottttwindnie	Dovina 70.38.78.229	3-Nov-06/1:18 PM
"rhyming is hard" - Wrong!
Re: Footsteps by MacFrantic	Dovina 70.38.78.229	3-Nov-06/1:17 PM
The sound is poetry. Maybe that's all that matters.
Re: a comment on Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove	wilco 24.92.74.122	3-Nov-06/1:17 PM
clever
Re: a comment on Going Away to Fight a War by wilco	wilco 24.92.74.122	3-Nov-06/1:13 PM
When you write something that is halfway worth a shit I'll value your opinion.
Re: The Hunter, the Hunted, and the Bystander by Dovina	Ranger 62.252.32.15	3-Nov-06/9:51 AM
Nicely iambic for the most part. Is this from a film?
Re: a comment on The Hunter, the Hunted, and the Bystander by Dovina	Ranger 62.252.32.15	3-Nov-06/9:50 AM
All Poetry is like this place, but with fewer genuine critiques and with more exclamation marks. I can't log in to Eratosphere at the moment though :(
Re: a comment on Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove	Ranger 62.252.32.15	3-Nov-06/9:42 AM
Maybe 'eating cucumber sandwiches' would have been a more apt stereotype.
Re: a comment on Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove	Ranger 62.252.32.15	3-Nov-06/9:41 AM
I doubt it. Why would anyone want to invade this country? Even Hitler didn't want it. The only way we'll be invaded is through mass immigration - which, okay, is happening now - but I don't think is quite what you mean. In any case, the only group who seems to have any interest in actually taking over this place is the Muslim sect - and Jack Straw knows what happens when you get a large number of Muslims in your constituency. You never know, the BNP might one day throw up a leader with enough credibility to make it. That'll be interesting.
Re: 311006 txt to russia by daniella	INTRANSIT 152.163.100.6	3-Nov-06/6:42 AM
Just -Text to russia- would work. I'd go with less nature oriented scheme. New end: You unfold me in the morning. This could see a ten easy.
Re: Poem for Mahmuth by Dental Panic	INTRANSIT 152.163.100.6	3-Nov-06/6:36 AM
Shit. I liked the sadder wiser beers. Fuck. Has everyone out-read me here, too? Love the sounds. If it matters 10.