| Re: Dovina & Co by amanda_dcosta |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.203.196 |
8-Nov-06/1:07 PM |
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There seems to be some friendly badinage I am missing out on here.
The poem is crap.
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| Re: Bagni di Lucca by Sasha |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.203.196 |
8-Nov-06/1:06 PM |
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I have been to the baths at Lucca. They were out of soap at the time so I had to make do with a tinkle.
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| Re: Water Red by InWonderLand |
Edna Sweetlove 85.210.203.196 |
8-Nov-06/1:03 PM |
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| Re: Accusation by INTRANSIT |
Ranger 62.252.32.15 |
8-Nov-06/11:04 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Dovina & Co by amanda_dcosta |
Ranger 62.252.32.15 |
8-Nov-06/11:03 AM |
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Nice to see you about again - how was the holiday?
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| Re: a comment on Dovina & Co by amanda_dcosta |
Ranger 62.252.32.15 |
8-Nov-06/11:03 AM |
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Remember: throat is for up, bowels are for down.
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| Re: a comment on Bagni di Lucca by Sasha |
Ranger 62.252.32.15 |
8-Nov-06/10:59 AM |
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| Re: Bagni di Lucca by Sasha |
INTRANSIT 205.188.117.10 |
8-Nov-06/6:12 AM |
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Ranger, Howl? Why the eights?
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| Re: Dovina & Co by amanda_dcosta |
Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199 |
8-Nov-06/3:24 AM |
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You make me want to puke.
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| Re: Bagni di Lucca by Sasha |
howl 81.178.72.28 |
8-Nov-06/2:51 AM |
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and how does one go about translating daft formatting?
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| Re: The Hunter, the Hunted, and the Bystander by Dovina |
some deleted user 64.140.227.175 |
7-Nov-06/9:43 AM |
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The poem works for me except for "tiger's mouth"--I think with your talent you could find a better simile. Good work overall though--as usual.
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| Re: a comment on Bagni di Lucca by Sasha |
Sasha 128.135.197.92 |
6-Nov-06/8:03 PM |
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No. It's just rhymed spontaneously, as is Montale's fashion.
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| Re: Dovina & Co by amanda_dcosta |
amanda_dcosta 61.17.226.198 |
6-Nov-06/6:50 PM |
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Hi everyone. Sorry for the silence, but I'm back now. Hope to see you all more often.
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| Re: Bagni di Lucca by Sasha |
Ranger 62.252.32.15 |
6-Nov-06/9:46 AM |
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I'll trust you to have got the translation right. Is this a form of sonnet?
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| Re: So Easy by InWonderLand |
Sasha 128.135.197.7 |
5-Nov-06/8:07 PM |
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This poem doesen't hold any water. I have nothing to sink my teeth into; only a dim, colorless confessional atmosphere that is totally out of place. Give me some life!
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| Re: Toe Jam Poem by EDNA by Edna Sweetlove |
some deleted user 84.68.101.131 |
5-Nov-06/12:56 PM |
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ummm, did you see my poem, more suck than blow?? ummm, never mind...if i get a straw, i can do a juice extraction number, and save all the crusty bits for later.
now then sweety...do tell me bout budapest!
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| Re: a comment on Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove |
Dovina 70.38.78.229 |
4-Nov-06/11:30 AM |
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Where is that old cuss? We used to have such sweet walks in the glimmers of moonlight, reflected in ripples on the pools of dog piss. From Edna, all I see is dog piss.
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| Re: a comment on Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove |
wilco 24.92.74.122 |
4-Nov-06/9:10 AM |
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I kind of figured. That's why I didn't continue arguing my point. At least with -=Dark_Angel=- it was amusing.
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| Re: a comment on For Elizabeth, Wherever She May Be by wilco |
wilco 24.92.74.122 |
4-Nov-06/9:08 AM |
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Thanks. To be honest, I absolutely hate this song now. I'm not sure if I think it sucks r if I'm just tired of it at this point but I do...I really do.
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| Re: a comment on Monsters by wilco |
wilco 24.92.74.122 |
4-Nov-06/9:07 AM |
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I'm sure we will if we can get ourselves signed. If not, there's probably not much hope of it. Spread the word so we can make it happen.
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