Re: Fanatic by Dovina	richa 81.178.91.116	15-Jan-07/2:18 PM
Is this about how people who know things mock people who don't know things because people who know things have not received 'gentleness'. I think it is.
Re: Same old rancour (a yellow stream of consciousness) by ecargo	richa 81.178.91.116	15-Jan-07/2:10 PM
I like pratfallen. To fall on one's buttocks. Very apt.
Re: Oh to be a Scot! by Donald McFuck	Dr Toilet 194.154.22.36	15-Jan-07/9:00 AM
Dear Toilet feels sympathy for you!
Re: Fragrant Love by Engelbert Humpalot	Dr Toilet 194.154.22.36	15-Jan-07/8:58 AM
Dr Toilet wanks when he reads things like this!
Re: Blind Fart by Blind Fart	Dr Toilet 194.154.22.36	15-Jan-07/8:57 AM
Dr Toilet likes this one as he likes toilet things!
Re: Grafton Street Late Joys by Engelbert Humpalot	Dr Toilet 194.154.22.36	15-Jan-07/8:56 AM
Dr Toilet likes this one as he likes toilet things and filth!
Re: George and Samson by Edna Sweetlove	Dr Toilet 194.154.22.36	15-Jan-07/8:55 AM
Dr Toilet likes this one as he likes things about bottoms!
Re: Edna's Video Library by Edna Sweetlove	Dr Toilet 194.154.22.36	15-Jan-07/8:54 AM
Dr Toilet likes this one as he likes rude things! And sex too!
Re: A Fart For All Mankind by Edna Sweetlove	Dr Toilet 194.154.22.36	15-Jan-07/8:53 AM
Dr Toilet likes this one as he likes toilet things!
Re: Fury by wilco	Prince of Void 213.207.253.125	15-Jan-07/7:26 AM
Good job ..it's a great poem
Re: a comment on Fanatic by Dovina	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	15-Jan-07/5:34 AM
Right, don't quite understand the ending. But much more helpful.
Re: Brains for Barter by Dovina	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	15-Jan-07/5:32 AM
I've had wind which has resulted in the runs. Terrible, you have my sympathy; although I wouldn't condone publicising the fact.
Re: Same old rancour (a yellow stream of consciousness) by ecargo	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	15-Jan-07/5:27 AM
No idea what you're on about old bean, but I'll give you a ten anyway.
Re: a comment on Asbestosis by Stephen Robins	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	15-Jan-07/5:25 AM
What the bloody hell are you gibbering on about? I have three usernames, everyone, me and fuzzylogicisatwat.
Re: He's... by holliebollie_19	wilco 24.92.74.122	14-Jan-07/9:37 PM
I'm sure you'll take this as me just being mean, but I'm just giving my assessment. This is just a simple little thing that you'd doodle in your trapper keeper during study hall....Not what you post for review and criticism....even here... If you REALLY like to write and want to get better...read some poetry and learn to use imagery and detail and try writing something that's not the lovelorn ramblings of bored student. You're going to get made fun of posting things like this. I don't mean to quit writing entirely...I don't think that anyone should do that...just work on it before you post it. Cheers.
Re: Yell! by MacFrantic	wilco 24.92.74.122	14-Jan-07/9:26 PM
Som of this is good (1/2 the second stanza the third stanza except for the Angel in black line), Don't really like the rest and the 1st stanza is terrible, I think.
Re: a comment on Eenie Meenie Minie Moe by Edna Sweetlove	Engelbert Humpalot 85.210.225.22	14-Jan-07/12:40 PM
You sound like a boring c*nt
Re: SNOGGO's Adolescent Adventure in Sidmouth by Edna Sweetlove	Engelbert Humpalot 85.210.225.22	14-Jan-07/12:39 PM
Fabbo.
Re: a comment on Edna's Christmas Farewell by Edna Sweetlove	Engelbert Humpalot 85.210.225.22	14-Jan-07/12:37 PM
You sound like a turdhead
Re: Peeping Through The Window by Edna Sweetlove	Engelbert Humpalot 85.210.225.22	14-Jan-07/12:35 PM
I love a juicy pussy.