poemranker ::Yell! by MacFrantic

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Free verse № 148751

Yell!

Member since 2003 · Posted 13 Jan 2007 · 1 comment

Tell me I'm wrong again Pray for me and my godlessness because whatever I say and whatever I do I'll be wrong for you until I can't be someone else anymore What right do we have to immortality? I want to take responsibility for my recklessness sinful nature and I'll give the fearful my tongue but keep my heart My Angel is robed in black She has a whoreish moan and loves me without pity for she stumbles on the train of the divine She laughs as she falls

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[4] wilco 14-Jan-07/9:26 PM Reply
Som of this is good (1/2 the second stanza the third stanza except for the Angel in black line), Don't really like the rest and the 1st stanza is terrible, I think.