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Yell! (Free verse) by MacFrantic Tell me I'm wrong again
Pray for me and my godlessness
because whatever I say and whatever I do
I'll be wrong for you
until I can't be someone else anymore
What right do we have to immortality?
I want to take responsibility for my
recklessness
sinful nature
and I'll give the fearful my tongue
but keep my heart
My Angel is robed in black
She has a whoreish moan
and loves me without pity
for she stumbles on the train of the divine
She laughs as she falls
Up the ladder:
Sunrise
Down the ladder:
Matters of the Heart
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Posted: January 13, 2007 11:19 PM PST; Last modified: January 13, 2007 11:19 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.8814354 Overall Rank: 9974 Comments:
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wilco @ 24.92.74.122
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14-Jan-07/9:26 PM
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Som of this is good (1/2 the second stanza the third stanza except for the Angel in black line), Don't really like the rest and the 1st stanza is terrible, I think.
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