| Re: Quantum Reality by Quarton |
Dovina 208.127.90.245 |
2-Mar-07/8:50 PM |
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The title seems too narrow, since this is about more than quantum mechanics. Itâs a kind of wandering theory of everything, where supernovae is misspelled. Itâs a mixture of science and speculation, and edges on preaching. But you avoid that trap and stop after saying that we humans are, in your opinion, not separate entities as we suppose, but part of some organic whole. Iâd like it better if it held closer to real science until the end, as it does in much of it, delaying âthe inseparable cosmic webâ idea. I think that would make your last verse more powerful.
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| Re: Flea poem by Sing4Jesus! |
mr cunt 85.210.204.236 |
2-Mar-07/6:05 PM |
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Fabbo. May God bugger himself.
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| Re: Kill Criminals In The Name Of JESUS! by Sing4Jesus! |
mr cunt 85.210.204.236 |
2-Mar-07/6:05 PM |
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Hilariously appalling. It could easily be part of the Yank National Anthem
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| Re: Israel (Through The Eyes Of One Jewish Soul) by slana5 |
mr cunt 85.210.204.236 |
2-Mar-07/6:04 PM |
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Fascist Yid rubbish. Israel should be wiped off the face of the earth.
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| Re: The Willy Poem by Engelbert Humpalot |
mr cunt 85.210.204.236 |
2-Mar-07/6:03 PM |
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Fucking hilarious. Take 0/10.
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| Re: Zinnias are a funny flower by Bachus |
mr cunt 85.210.204.236 |
2-Mar-07/6:02 PM |
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Drivel. But more than that. Illiterate drivel. Pathetic horseturds.
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| Re: Las Gaviotas by Bachus |
mr cunt 85.210.204.236 |
2-Mar-07/6:01 PM |
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Illiterate, ungrammatical tripe. Why not learn some English, you silly asshole? You can't even spell your own pen name. Mongol.
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| Re: The Rift by Bachus |
mr cunt 85.210.204.236 |
2-Mar-07/6:00 PM |
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How wonderful you cannot spell your own pen name: it should be Bacchus, or to be more accurate, Backscuttler.
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| Re: Bon Voyage by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
mr cunt 85.210.204.236 |
2-Mar-07/5:59 PM |
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To say this was a great poem would be not so much an understatement but more of a blatant lie. It is pretentious shit and your pen name is truly common and nerdy. You must be a total cunt.
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| Re: My Pet Gerbil by Engelbert Humpalot |
mr cunt 85.210.204.236 |
2-Mar-07/5:57 PM |
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Fabulous. I turded with excitement.
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| Re: A Tragic Love Tryst In The Park Near The Sewage Works by Edna Sweetlove |
mr cunt 85.210.204.236 |
2-Mar-07/5:56 PM |
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Fabulous. I shot my load reading this.
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| Re: The Laws of Life by lrustagi |
richa 81.179.219.225 |
2-Mar-07/2:28 PM |
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So many problems here. Some of the apostrophes are plain daft. When has anyone in the deepest recesses of time ever spoken about something being 'ttractive or 'cerbic or something that 'xtends. The poem refuses to yield a sentence that actually means anything. Who the hell is zealous smith? What is the glow of God? Have you seen God glow recently. What is 'crisp the cast, thou walk out cleanse the outer, hence inner stout' all about '[the test of truth]fist it firm an' hold it tight' What!!. And the grammar 'full of flurry an' floral flourish bridle is there in thou hands'. And don't you realise that to close a sentence you need a full stop. -bum-
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| Re: The Laws of Life by lrustagi |
jessicazee 65.30.187.185 |
1-Mar-07/3:04 AM |
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Courageous (sp?) and well-tought-out. 8.9
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| Re: a comment on Remembering Nick by jessicazee |
jessicazee 65.30.187.185 |
1-Mar-07/2:54 AM |
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thank you for finally saying that. I totally have to change it to "Remebering My Doctor".
P.S. What about Nick Rhodes from Duran Duran?
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| Re: The Dovina Limericks by Everyone |
Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199 |
28-Feb-07/8:17 AM |
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There once was a blob named Dovina,
Christ, you'd have wept had you seen her,
All of that weight,
Squeeze into four feet and eight,
She had the combined mass of Bosnia and Herzegovina.
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| Re: Leap! by Jill Stockinger |
mr cunt 85.210.255.94 |
27-Feb-07/5:18 PM |
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| Re: Leap! by Jill Stockinger |
mr cunt 85.210.255.94 |
27-Feb-07/5:18 PM |
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| Re: Leap! by Jill Stockinger |
mr cunt 85.210.255.94 |
27-Feb-07/5:18 PM |
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I think I have a low opinion of you and Rocky-poo.
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| Re: Leap! by Jill Stockinger |
mr cunt 85.210.255.94 |
27-Feb-07/5:17 PM |
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This poem shows you and ROCKMAGE (same person) are cunts, total and utter cunts
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| Re: Leap! by Jill Stockinger |
mr cunt 85.210.255.94 |
27-Feb-07/5:17 PM |
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This poem shows you and ROCKMAGE (same person) are cunts, total and utter cunts
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