Re: Out of this crowd a mistress or a friend by Prince of Void	mr cunt 85.210.220.79	5-Mar-07/3:15 AM
Boring, pompous drivel. Are you Rockmage or Shusshin in disguise?
Re: End by Dovina	mr cunt 85.210.220.79	5-Mar-07/3:14 AM
The best bit about this is that relief-giving word: "end".
Re: Divorcing Tennessee by Dovina	mr cunt 85.210.220.79	5-Mar-07/3:13 AM
I was recommended to read your poems by Rockmage and having struggled through this, he is totall correct. You are a cunt.
Re: Two More Cunts Who Are One Cunt by mr cunt	mr cunt 85.210.220.79	5-Mar-07/3:11 AM
Is Dovina a cunt too? I'll go and read her poetry,
Re: a comment on The ceremony of death by Prince of Void	Prince of Void 80.71.124.162	5-Mar-07/2:24 AM
A good poem With unanimous votes Can’t alter the fate of innocent people They have killed so far We always look for votes Rather than writing a poem About people have never found peace in their lives... What’s our role as a poet? To reveal deep thoughts and feelings They represent our aesthetic point of views For every aspect of human lives Or we trying to show dreams of better tomorrow The road not taken Both roads are the same But I always love to take the one I know it’s the same as the other one So that’s good poem or bad poem makes difference Who cares? Who wants to be top of list? I’m still trying to find my role As you commented it’s not a good poem I entirely agree with u Please tell me all weakness of this poem
Re: An All-American Fairy by Edna Sweetlove	mr cunt 85.210.193.192	4-Mar-07/6:33 PM
Fab Fab Fabbo. What a cunty poem!
Re: The ceremony of death by Prince of Void	Dovina 208.127.90.14	4-Mar-07/3:21 PM
Don’t believe Rocky; this is not a good poem; he only agrees with your position. Hell, if I write about the virtue of zeroing, he’ll leap all over it. No, but if you do, he will. All he has for me is ‘honey bun” and “squeal.” “Of” on line 2 surely should be “of.” “Of buildings had laid in ruins” should surely lose the “had.” To name just a few.
Re: Edna's Christmas Farewell by Edna Sweetlove	Dr Peter Douglas 80.225.124.196	3-Mar-07/1:43 PM
Dear oh dear edna what a sorry Chrimbo! Never mind theres always easter to look forward to.
Re: A Single Strand of Golden Yellow by Aetius	Ranger 81.103.124.179	3-Mar-07/8:29 AM
This is the level of mediocrity to which the majority of us aspire.
Re: looking for by Phalkon	Bethy 165.154.46.45	3-Mar-07/4:39 AM
Writers block, It's easier if you try to eat Cherrio's with a fork. :) Bethy
Re: Shoe Thief by Blue Magpie	Bethy 165.154.46.45	3-Mar-07/4:28 AM
A poetic story of canine reality...fun to read, my son loved it! he gives you a 9 and I gave you a 7, so...we compromised with an 8 :) Bethy
Re: Thought by Quarton	Bethy 165.154.46.45	3-Mar-07/4:17 AM
This is fantastic!! a little hard to read...more flow and its a go for me... :) Bethy
Re: A Single Strand of Golden Yellow by Aetius	Bethy 165.154.46.45	3-Mar-07/4:13 AM
I love this kind of "other verse" I write alot of it...I will post my sweater poem soon as well...it was written many moons ago...:) Bethy
Re: The Laws of Life by lrustagi	Bethy 165.154.46.45	3-Mar-07/4:06 AM
very good, I like this form of language...It appeals to one of my other lives...:) :) Bethy
Re: The Beginning by jessicazee	Bethy 165.154.46.45	3-Mar-07/3:52 AM
I don't know why but I get it...I've been wearing a single shoe for 7 years...lol :) Bethy
Re: Quantum Reality by Quarton	Bethy 165.154.46.45	3-Mar-07/3:44 AM
I read this twice...pause...three times...dito on science and speculation(Dovina)...second last para is my fav part...:) Bethy
Re: In the assessment of zero by Prince of Void	Bethy 165.154.46.45	3-Mar-07/3:36 AM
Sir, your poem in comments is better...however the one posted is good too...I thought of war and dying...helplessness and pain...sad thoughts but that is what popped into my mind... :) Bethy
Re: Taste of Ash (A long project barely beginning) by sliver	Bethy 165.154.46.45	3-Mar-07/3:28 AM
Is this about life...longevity...spontanious combustion...without an inner fire, one could fizzel out...??? This is what I got from your lyrics...am I anywhere close? I'll vote later... :) Bethy
Re: Taste of Ash (A long project barely beginning) by sliver	Dovina 208.127.90.245	2-Mar-07/8:57 PM
First 2 lines are good. Then it runs amok, without more to go on.
Re: The Beginning by jessicazee	Dovina 208.127.90.245	2-Mar-07/8:55 PM
It's sketchy, as if meant for some special person. I'd have to ask you to fill in the gaps before I could say much more.