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Remembering Nick (Free verse) by jessicazee
the last time we kissed you had more teeth, smiled more, we ate thin-crust pizza at Zoo Beach, chased bully seagulls and that goose! he almost ate your cigarette butt, you looked at the lake and said, "jellyfish are so smart" all the bottles we broke we picked them up, the green and the brown glass, "when I die burn everything and start the fire with my shirt" the grit I bit tonight from a clay bowl in Mexico is a fire you lit and your shirt from Russia I'm wearing it

Up the ladder: Feel Like A Failure
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.976287
Overall Rank: 8280
Posted: February 20, 2007 11:02 PM PST; Last modified: February 20, 2007 11:02 PM PST
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[n/a] drnick @ 24.247.112.155 | 21-Feb-07/10:26 PM | Reply
nobody named nick is worth remembering
[n/a] jessicazee @ 65.30.187.185 > drnick | 1-Mar-07/2:54 AM | Reply
thank you for finally saying that. I totally have to change it to "Remebering My Doctor".
P.S. What about Nick Rhodes from Duran Duran?
[9] richa @ 81.179.135.216 | 24-Feb-07/2:17 PM | Reply
Like this. Lots of interesting lines. Last time we kissed you had more teeth. Jellyfish are so smart.
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