klosterfobik
replying on Delicate Was by klosterfobik
11 Sep 2004, 5:58 PM
myself?
to hell?
Ouch!
Thank you!
"But I cannot escape
For I am stuck within myself"
This logic falls prey to the fallacies of Cartesian Materialism. There is no "you" that is within "yourself."
It's the strangest thing, I can't help but read your stuff. It's not the best thing I've ever read, far from it, but I keep reading it. So bonus points there.
What?
I decided to re-post this poem since it was being accused of self-voting. So here we go again.
And at least I know how to punctuate after a comma.
thats skill to the nth degree.
you should of course add that
My dads a fireman so there what does your dad do? he i bet he's a binman or a college lecturer or somting. And i bet you like spam sandwitches as well and Jason Donovan. So there!
Nice to see everyone is still entirely gay here on poemranker. and that zodiac appears to be the most gayestist of all.
Yeah?
presser
pickle
Cambodian
you
yourself
fuck
go
Ooh. This goes on the favorite tab. Nice.
Well, I can't complain. 7 for me.
Hm.
I like how you took a serious topic and kind of made it into this elementary rhyming thing (and I'm not one to talk). It'll be a 5 for me.