LintyWeenis
on Funny Little World by LintyWeenis
11 Sep 2004, 3:42 PM
Hahaha, well burn my buscuits. This poem actually won something. I honestly didn't like this poem too much and am very suprised that it's doing as well as it is. But anyways, if my crappy poem can win something, then just think of the stuff you real writers can win.
Well, although I'm kind of stepping in out of nowhere, I don't think punctuation is for the artless, but it shouldn't be a defining trait in a good writer either. If someone has enough passion that he/she starts writing and doesn't put a period or comma where it should be, then oh well. The Literary Hand of God won't squash us just for that. Good poem.
Oooh, very interesting. Nice work.
"They make me glad". I don't know much about poetry, I mean I read and write the stuff and maybe it's just my simple understanding, but the line "They make me glad." kind of dropped me. I liked the poem though.
Well, I say it's open to interpretation because if someone reads it and thinks that this person is screaming out of excitement, well then that's what they get. I personally wrote it with that person screaming in fear because I'm about to go hallin' ass down a busy freeway. I can see where I could use some clarity but grammar?
alrighty
A sack of shit inside a bag of trash,sitting in a puddle of piss.
Very thoughtfull poem, I really like the way you write.
I've seen mooseknuckles with more style and flair.
This is just bad writing, but with emphasis on
what it's like to be black, poor, and in a dress.
A shit sandwich, hold the bread.
Fuck you nigger
Patricia street is needlessly ambiguous because it could be a person or a street.
I spend too much time on the internet saying this, but here goes. The vast majority of opinions are pointless because they come from pointless people. That you have the right to an opinion is neither here nor there. Every uneducated lout has the right to an opinion. That is why a cunning system of apartheid has been devised whereby everyone can hold an opinion but noeone listens to stupid people.
Did you ever think that people read poems because they think the poet may have something interesting to say? And that the interesting thing fares best when expressed lucidly.
You've got a nerve, Dovina. After all the misery your mindlessly verbose style has caused, you still insist on spuming out convoluted interpretations of what was, and always will be, a sentence that went totally tits-up. I can honestly say that in all my years of poemeranking I have never met anyone who went through life with as much prudish disgredard for the thoughts and feelings of others as you. You're a disgrace, and I don't want to look at you for another minute.