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Deep Sleep (Free verse) by Enchantres
One day I will fall asleep Maybe under a big hollow tree, maybe on a flying cloud For now I don't know But when that time comes I know I will never wake up again Only the thought of dying alone Feels like I'm dead already So tell me Do you have faith? Faith in what we believe? If you have not Please believe, for me So that when I'm gone I know I'm not forgotten by you, or your love I only want to be found by you In a silence Who only you and I understand So please don't cry for me The sky won't fall forever I just want you to know that I love you A kiss can tell more then a thousand words So when you kiss me, I know the whole story Don't be sad or blue True love is forever And I will always love you...

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.75
Weighted score: 5.2086053
Overall Rank: 4504
Posted: September 11, 2004 2:38 PM PDT; Last modified: September 11, 2004 2:38 PM PDT
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Comments:
[8] LintyWeenis @ 152.163.101.10 | 11-Sep-04/3:29 PM | Reply
Oooh, very interesting. Nice work.
[9] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 | 12-Sep-04/9:35 AM | Reply
What a perfect way to die. Nice.
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