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... (Free verse) by Jezabele-In-Hell
My life
My whole
My sick individuality
My pain and suffering
My sickening self
How I wish to kill
How I wish to madden this world
For it has brung me much of hell
Im screaming in my head
Let me out!
Let me out!
But I cannot escape
For I am stuck within myself
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.179294
Overall Rank: 4825
Posted: September 11, 2004 5:40 PM PDT; Last modified: September 11, 2004 5:40 PM PDT
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For I am stuck within myself"
This logic falls prey to the fallacies of Cartesian Materialism. There is no "you" that is within "yourself."