Replying to a comment on:

... (Free verse) by Jezabele-In-Hell

My life My whole My sick individuality My pain and suffering My sickening self How I wish to kill How I wish to madden this world For it has brung me much of hell Im screaming in my head Let me out! Let me out! But I cannot escape For I am stuck within myself

T. Jonathron Remp 1-Sep-05/9:15 AM
All I meant to say is that "you" can't be stuck within "yourself" because "yourself" and "you" are the same thing. You can't ever say that a Set A is within Set A because it doesn't make any sense; The boundaries of "you" and "yourself" are always identical and so there can be no way for one to be within the other. When you say that there is an "I" that is different than and within "myself," they are claiming that the mind is something different or beyond the physical brain. However, if you meant to say that your brain is stuck within your body, then that is reasonable, since Set A (your brain) is different than Set B (your body). Anyway, I apologize for the confusion. I just meant to say that the last line seemed specious to me at the time.




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001