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unouluvme on Activating your Infinity by horus8 27 Jan 2005, 3:54 PM
to much like a story
Shuushin on In Answer To Your Question by Dovina 27 Jan 2005, 2:59 PM
3 spaces between comma and the "I'll" in the 3rd stanza I guess it works as a "prose poem" - but why? This could be said in far fewer words and cleaner as a less verbose (or nounose) poem.
Hi t7 - a pretty thing, but a couple spellings: "Sterling", "Sapphires" and "threw" should be "through" and I don't know if you meant "painful" or did the painflu on purpose. "in to" should prolly be "into"
Dovina on Devil, Devil, Hear Me Pray by PsydewaysTears 27 Jan 2005, 11:58 AM
Anything with suicide in it deserves a zero, but because of Verse 4 and the first half of Verse 6, you get a 7.
Lifeboatman on Nybbas' Lamentation by Y2kSlamPoet 27 Jan 2005, 4:32 AM
just savor it, Dreamer... it may or may not come back.. but, hey, there still AIDS.. 10 as always
Damn.. these things are vague.. but gives you that warm toasted feeling like marshmallows left in the sun.. 10
haha.. anything with the devil in it deserves more than a ten... but, alas, we only have up to ten and the devil doesn't exist... life is unfair
Lifeboatman replying on #28 by Lifeboatman 27 Jan 2005, 4:24 AM
what's eating you up these days, dude... poor diet?? How've you been anyway??
thepinkbunnyofdoom replying on Half a dozen by thepinkbunnyofdoom 26 Jan 2005, 5:52 PM
Actually The Male Character does it. Its part of the short coming to livejournal near you soon. <3 Jason
Very funny little poem. I like the second stanza a lot more than the first and I think it could stand alone. It's very cute.
thepinkbunnyofdoom replying on Half a dozen by thepinkbunnyofdoom 26 Jan 2005, 2:30 PM
One extra? and yes 6 roses, they were dipped in wax, pink my favorite color and ment to be a suprize that ended up in the trash. <3 Jason
thepinkbunnyofdoom replying on The Difference by thepinkbunnyofdoom 26 Jan 2005, 2:24 PM
Jesu loves you my son? lol. yea, a bit preachy, but sometimes thats how the best conversations are. <3 Jason
Doug on Lonely People by april fool 26 Jan 2005, 1:57 PM
There's a party in my pants tonight, and everyone's invited. I hope your all excited?
Doug on Birth by Caducus 26 Jan 2005, 1:52 PM
Yawn
Doug on Matthew's Bastard by Caducus 26 Jan 2005, 1:51 PM
You poor fucker. Get over it pussy! Oh,and your poem sucks big black panther nuts.
Doug on Before I met you by *.*ReAdY To SnAp.*. 26 Jan 2005, 1:46 PM
Do your parents know your posting this crap?
Doug on "I" became "We" by *.*ReAdY To SnAp.*. 26 Jan 2005, 1:43 PM
This is a joke,right? If not please seek help - Such as english 101 or some kind of therapy.
Doug on MENSA's For Fags Like Me by <{Baba^Yaga}> 26 Jan 2005, 1:32 PM
Not funny or clever? So what is this? Just lame.
jroday replying on B.L.C. LONG GONE by jroday 26 Jan 2005, 1:29 PM
You're right I meant to say full of wonder