Re: a comment on The Kissing by Skamper	Skamper 58.171.13.183	19-Oct-07/5:33 AM
yeah - agreed...the time it takes to read is critical to the rhythm
Re: a comment on View From The Gutter by Skamper	Skamper 58.171.44.90	19-Oct-07/5:30 AM
One of the first writes I have done - wordy - yes, for what I do now...but I can't change it...call me sentimental... :)
Re: a comment on Empty by Skamper	Skamper 58.171.14.30	19-Oct-07/5:26 AM
I'm not really sure - it arrived in a picture, like a snapshot and I wrote it...I find it just sad
Re: a comment on Llamas by Skamper	Skamper 58.171.14.116	19-Oct-07/5:22 AM
thankyou for taking part again... :)
Re: a comment on Llamas by Skamper	Skamper 58.171.53.231	19-Oct-07/5:21 AM
I should have studied more - at times my own ignorance astounds me
Re: a comment on The Finding by Skamper	Skamper 58.171.63.165	19-Oct-07/5:18 AM
bring a bucket and spade - if we can't find the hidden depths, making sand-castles is just as fun
Re: a comment on Paper Maker by Skamper	Skamper 58.171.27.125	19-Oct-07/5:15 AM
it's taken me a while to get a hang of the preposition thing - and to notice your comments...thanks.. :)
Re: a comment on The Search by Skamper	Skamper 58.171.37.15	19-Oct-07/5:12 AM
yeah, it needs sharpening...looking back
Re: A River Ran Through It by Dovina	Stephen Robins 82.211.67.131	19-Oct-07/4:24 AM
Wow - you're still producing this bile!
Re: a comment on Never Let Go by x0lovelylarnx0	x0lovelylarnx0 68.57.36.157	18-Oct-07/7:06 PM
I'm not getting touchy! And yes I'm here for criticism, but i'm her for reasonable criticism not the same thing written on every single poem of mine that you rate!
Re: a comment on Never Let Go by x0lovelylarnx0	pete 62.56.53.172	18-Oct-07/6:38 PM
excuse me, but you are here for criticism are you not? ... or just to show off ... in poetry often a lot more can be said by fewer words ... don't get so touchy
Re: a comment on The Friendship Storm by x0lovelylarnx0	x0lovelylarnx0 68.57.36.157	18-Oct-07/11:31 AM
is that like all you know how to say is too many words!?
Re: a comment on Never Let Go by x0lovelylarnx0	x0lovelylarnx0 68.57.36.157	18-Oct-07/11:20 AM
It's Poetry I can have as many words as I want!
Re: Never Let Go by x0lovelylarnx0	x0lovelylarnx0 68.57.36.157	18-Oct-07/11:19 AM
Too the people who gave me 0s, would you explain to me why you gave me 0s except for Rockmage because I honestly do not care what you think since you just go around giving everyone 0s!
Re: A double haiku about President Putin by Engelbert Humpalot	pete 62.56.48.109	18-Oct-07/8:01 AM
cute
Re: Owl Eyes by MacFrantic	pete 62.56.48.109	18-Oct-07/8:00 AM
dunno why but i like this ... poetry,though... not so sure
Re: The Devil and I by forsaken	pete 62.56.48.109	18-Oct-07/7:59 AM
re-write once the devil has gone and note the difference
Re: The Friendship Storm by x0lovelylarnx0	pete 62.56.48.109	18-Oct-07/7:56 AM
too many words
Re: Holding You by forsaken	pete 62.56.48.109	18-Oct-07/7:54 AM
shows promise
Re: inside the raven by PsydewaysTears	pete 62.56.48.109	18-Oct-07/7:53 AM
don't he though