| Re: RAGTIME by xyz |
pete 62.56.48.109 |
18-Oct-07/7:52 AM |
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| Re: This Song by MacFrantic |
pete 62.56.48.109 |
18-Oct-07/7:51 AM |
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cop-out saying it's for someone else .... good story tho
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| Re: Alice to Slumber by Skamper |
pete 62.56.48.109 |
18-Oct-07/7:48 AM |
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scary as fuck and somewhat sexy ... or am i reading too much there? .... more tea .... genius
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| Re: Unmistakably Mistaken by secretlyvulnerable |
pete 62.56.48.109 |
18-Oct-07/7:45 AM |
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juvenile ... still, can't knock you for your years
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| Re: My Courtney by secretlyvulnerable |
pete 62.56.48.109 |
18-Oct-07/7:44 AM |
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.... er ... perp or victim ? ( or do you consider yourself both ?) ... nul points ... for the poem alone, that is
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| Re: Wayne, do you? by T. Jonathron Remp |
pete 62.56.48.109 |
18-Oct-07/7:38 AM |
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either a 8 or a 1 ....dunno .... say 5 .... involving, though ... make that 6
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| Re: Never Let Go by x0lovelylarnx0 |
pete 62.56.48.109 |
18-Oct-07/7:36 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Be The One by forsaken |
forsaken 24.153.186.246 |
17-Oct-07/8:29 PM |
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It's a bt strange cause she still means has much has she always has, but I just don't think of her that way. Maybe I realize I couldn't hurt her just being her friend if that makes sense, so I just stop thinking for her that way.
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| Re: a comment on Losing you by forsaken |
forsaken 24.153.186.246 |
17-Oct-07/8:07 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Be The One by forsaken |
forsaken 24.153.186.246 |
17-Oct-07/8:03 PM |
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Actually she has become my best friend and even though her felings still mean the world to me. I've learned that I'm more then happy just being friends.
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| Re: While waiting for someone to check in my cars by INTRANSIT |
Caducus 80.229.129.138 |
17-Oct-07/1:34 AM |
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Sweet. The seperation of adult responsibility and childhood innocence all linked by flesh until the teddy is subtle yet leaves me wanting those good ole 'stand by me' river phoenix days back.
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| Re: While waiting for someone to check in my cars by INTRANSIT |
T. Jonathron Remp 70.253.68.121 |
17-Oct-07/12:47 AM |
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A slice of time. A 17 calorie slice of time, a thin, carbohydrate-free slice of time. A trans-fat free, utterly nutritionally void slice of time. ~10~
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| Re: The Friendship Storm by x0lovelylarnx0 |
T. Jonathron Remp 70.253.68.121 |
17-Oct-07/12:45 AM |
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The word "separate" is the strongest word in this poem, thank you. Cheers and beers, and welcome to Area 6, secret hideout.
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| Re: While waiting for someone to check in my cars by INTRANSIT |
x0lovelylarnx0 68.57.36.157 |
16-Oct-07/3:07 PM |
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The poems gives a good vision of the mother and her children.
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| Re: Alice to Slumber by Skamper |
INTRANSIT 204.110.228.254 |
16-Oct-07/2:56 PM |
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| Re: My Courtney by secretlyvulnerable |
some deleted user 207.191.187.20 |
16-Oct-07/9:28 AM |
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THAT IS SO SAD. I KNDA KNOW WHAT U ARE TALKING ABOUT . IT HAPPENS TO ALOT OF PEOPLE I GUESS.
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| Re: Jesus by Sing4Jesus! |
some deleted user 207.191.187.20 |
16-Oct-07/9:24 AM |
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IDONT GET THIS POEM IS WONDERFUL. Y DONT PEOPLE LIKE IT..
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| Re: I love you by jerzeygirl22 |
secretlyvulnerable 207.75.227.189 |
16-Oct-07/12:06 AM |
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I know exactly how you feel
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| Re: Be The One by forsaken |
secretlyvulnerable 207.75.227.189 |
16-Oct-07/12:04 AM |
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I hope you share this with teh woman it's all about.. I dont see how she could not want to be with you...
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| Re: Losing you by forsaken |
secretlyvulnerable 207.75.227.189 |
16-Oct-07/12:00 AM |
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The last two lines really get me...
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