Re: SEX (II) by blkarak	secretlyvulnerable 207.75.227.189	15-Oct-07/11:51 PM
I'm jealous of you... for once I experienced this with the love of my life... but now he's gone and I fear he will never come back. I miss it...
Re: a comment on back o' the fridge by nypoet22	nypoet22 65.9.171.206	15-Oct-07/3:58 PM
hmm, you want a name for the mold-infested mystery organism that you thought was dead, but which hides in the shadows and stinks up the whole kitchen? for lack of a better analogy, i'll name it "richard cheney."
Re: a comment on The Friendship Storm by x0lovelylarnx0	x0lovelylarnx0 68.57.36.157	15-Oct-07/11:17 AM
Got Ya! lol Slow much! If I find time I might try to re-do this poem. I never have time to relax and find my own style!
Re: Wait To Answer by forsaken	SupremeDreamer 130.65.109.104	15-Oct-07/9:23 AM
Your not serious are you? If this were a "romantic pimple" I'd give this a ten, but it's been labeled as free verse, so here is a zero. By the way, it's seriously gay to vote for yourself.
Re: RAGTIME by xyz	Skamper 58.171.7.35	14-Oct-07/7:57 PM
why don't you just throw stones at her - pull her hair and maybe snap her bra-strap. then she'll know you really like her
Re: inside the raven by PsydewaysTears	Skamper 58.171.56.222	14-Oct-07/7:53 PM
nice work - lurking evil in a gently lulling tune... always the trap. :)
Re: a comment on The Friendship Storm by x0lovelylarnx0	Skamper 58.171.9.238	14-Oct-07/7:44 PM
Ok...you have an idea in your head of what you want to write and it seems to me you use terms that are overused and very familiar to what the public will see. Instead of thinking about what YOU see, you create the scene that's easily recognisible but totally worn out. If you write just for the recognition then you need to relax and find your own style - because this is fairly generic.
Re: a comment on back o' the fridge by nypoet22	Skamper 58.171.48.38	14-Oct-07/7:34 PM
I know the idea of what it was in the back o' the fridge isn't really important for this poem, but would you humour me (more like my daughter who I read this to) and put a name to it... :)
Re: a comment on The Friendship Storm by x0lovelylarnx0	x0lovelylarnx0 68.57.36.157	14-Oct-07/12:41 PM
your last sentence doesn't make since to me! lol
Re: Solstice, 2007 by lectricprincess	Skamper 58.171.12.106	13-Oct-07/9:47 PM
a pure pleasure to read -
Re: back o' the fridge by nypoet22	Skamper 58.171.36.131	13-Oct-07/9:43 PM
as natural as a dancer...loved it
Re: The Devil and I by forsaken	Skamper 58.171.59.184	13-Oct-07/9:34 PM
disjointed and lacking any kind of rhythm I could find (maybe just my two left brains)
Re: The Friendship Storm by x0lovelylarnx0	Skamper 58.171.31.190	13-Oct-07/9:28 PM
this is very bland - you need to drop such overused phrases and take what is in your head and write it in your own words...don't worry about what other people rate your work, it's not that important...honestly you seem to want to play to the masses instead of just playing.
Re: a comment on A Patch of Time by Skamper	Skamper 58.171.10.168	13-Oct-07/9:16 PM
I see it now - and I got the tenses wrong...feels should be felt - thankyou :)
Re: union with the eternal love by Prince of Void	alvinb 121.54.96.18	10-Oct-07/3:19 AM
just voting
Re: a comment on This Is Me by PoeticXTC	PoeticXTC 65.79.158.70	9-Oct-07/11:47 PM
Poetry is freedom of expression. FREEDOM OF EXPRESS. Using metaphorical terms and images are for a play on words. I wasn't intending on playing w/ my words.. Its a discriptive poem. It has double meaning to it. Try to read b/w the lines next time. If you want metaphors read other poems i've written or write and read your own.
Re: a comment on This Is Me by PoeticXTC	PoeticXTC 65.79.158.70	9-Oct-07/11:38 PM
how dare you?
Re: This Is Me by PoeticXTC	PoeticXTC 65.79.158.70	9-Oct-07/11:37 PM
my main point in this poem isn't just my physical appearance., nor is it an ego issue.. It's what people perceive of me. I am physically all these things but that's only what is seen. When in reality there is more to me then just a pretty face and nice body... maybe if you all weren't so narrow-minded you would have caught that in the last couple of lines. My peotic style will not be yours; neither will my personality be governed by your opinions of me.
Re: Random thoughts poem-do not try to find a meaning for there are too many. by lunar	x0lovelylarnx0 68.57.36.157	9-Oct-07/6:15 PM
Interesting! But a little confusing! But all-in-all it's pretty good!
Re: Children in the Storm by thepinkbunnyofdoom	x0lovelylarnx0 68.57.36.157	9-Oct-07/6:12 PM
The feeling of the poem is expressed well! Good Job!