Wait To Answer (Free verse) by forsaken
You've always been untouchable in my eyes
Lips so soft and smooth oh you had me lost
So perfect I'd even believe your lies
For your love my soul could be the cost
Still glady I'd give it to have you
For even just one day in my empty arms
Cause intill I met you I was in two
A part of me missing from this worlds harm
I was hiding when we met from things
But you badly had me wanting to be seen
I'm real happy we became friends
No I don't do drugs but I could be a feen
Cause some people say love is like a drug
If that's true then who better then you
To be an addict with so could you fall for my mug
Tell me as there is nothing I wouldn't do
To lift you up till we're above the clouds
Trust in me and I'll never let you down
I ask only one thing let your heart beat loud
Let me in so I can take away your frown
You've gone through enough let me do what I do best
I don't think I have to tell you what that is
It has alot to do with that gold inside your chest
Just wait to answer please let's first share one kiss
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.111111
Weighted score: 7.0109897
Overall Rank: 67
Posted: October 1, 2007 4:31 PM PDT; Last modified: October 1, 2007 4:31 PM PDT
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By the way, it's seriously gay to vote for yourself.