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Wait To Answer (Free verse) by forsaken
You've always been untouchable in my eyes Lips so soft and smooth oh you had me lost So perfect I'd even believe your lies For your love my soul could be the cost Still glady I'd give it to have you For even just one day in my empty arms Cause intill I met you I was in two A part of me missing from this worlds harm I was hiding when we met from things But you badly had me wanting to be seen I'm real happy we became friends No I don't do drugs but I could be a feen Cause some people say love is like a drug If that's true then who better then you To be an addict with so could you fall for my mug Tell me as there is nothing I wouldn't do To lift you up till we're above the clouds Trust in me and I'll never let you down I ask only one thing let your heart beat loud Let me in so I can take away your frown You've gone through enough let me do what I do best I don't think I have to tell you what that is It has alot to do with that gold inside your chest Just wait to answer please let's first share one kiss

Up the ladder: Old Friends
Down the ladder: Fragrant Love

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.529412
Weighted score: 7.2278986
Overall Rank: 19
Posted: October 1, 2007 4:31 PM PDT; Last modified: October 1, 2007 4:31 PM PDT
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[0] SupremeDreamer @ 130.65.109.104 | 15-Oct-07/9:23 AM | Reply
Your not serious are you? If this were a "romantic pimple" I'd give this a ten, but it's been labeled as free verse, so here is a zero.

By the way, it's seriously gay to vote for yourself.
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