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union with the eternal love (Other) by Prince of Void
Should I cry for my leaving? For this house of melting dreams No more desire for staying No more being as a guest I will return to where I belong So carry my body proudly To the horizon of open graves They are waiting impatiently For the traveler like me As The freedom is approaching The final act is on the stage of death Silence is the music of this scene And the light is that grieving sun It’s descending by the side of my last tears Shedding upon the shroud of darkness Thorough darkness The tiny light will seize me And all my life will be absorbed Into that unseen light of the other side Finally I will break the chain Of that fettered heart well death is beginning of union with the eternal love

Up the ladder: Mummy
Down the ladder: Supposition Now

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Arithmetic Mean: 0.5
Weighted score: 4.7865834
Overall Rank: 11267
Posted: September 20, 2007 2:43 AM PDT; Last modified: September 20, 2007 2:43 AM PDT
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[1] alvinb @ 121.54.96.18 | 10-Oct-07/3:19 AM | Reply
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