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Forbidden (Sonnet) by jduzz
A love has been denied, Your heart is broken. Life dosen`t seem worth it With the words that were spoken. But there is a light. You see it far away. Forbidden is your touch, you dream for that day. It can come anytime, love sneaks in from behind. Forbidden is your smile, it`s all in your mind. You can`t wait for the warmth, of the light on your face. Forbidden from your heart, is the hate and the space. The day has come at last. The light is finally here. Forbidden from your mind, the hate space,and fear. Love is here to stay. Taken its true place. Forbidden from your life, an empty smile on my face. November13,1998 John Uzzell

Up the ladder: Éire
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Arithmetic Mean: 0.5
Weighted score: 4.7865834
Overall Rank: 11273
Posted: April 8, 2007 7:43 PM PDT; Last modified: April 8, 2007 7:43 PM PDT
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[1] Sasha @ 128.135.197.101 | 22-Apr-07/5:37 AM | Reply
You've got to be kidding. This is some of the most cliché crap I've seen
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