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Losing you (Free verse) by forsaken
I was just sitting here Trying to learn how to deal with my fear I've never been so afaird before The thought of watching you walk through a door Has me laying awake sweeting all night Tossing and turning with my blankets I fight It would be worse then any nightmare To have it be over after all we shared So baby please stop worring cause I'd do anything to have it the way it was I ain't going anywhere I belong by yourside I don't care who knows it my feelings for you can't hide Don't worry about me nothing's changing my mind How you're the greatest thing a man could ever find Please don't let this be our goodbye Losing you would make the best part of me die

Up the ladder: Ment to be confusing
Down the ladder: So Long for now

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.9583335
Weighted score: 6.9452267
Overall Rank: 170
Posted: July 13, 2007 10:24 PM PDT; Last modified: July 13, 2007 10:24 PM PDT
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Comments:
[10] jerzeygirl22 @ 68.37.7.89 | 14-Jul-07/6:38 AM | Reply
its not our goodbye..........your not gonna lose me
[9] secretlyvulnerable @ 207.75.227.189 | 16-Oct-07/12:00 AM | Reply
The last two lines really get me...
[n/a] forsaken @ 24.153.186.246 > secretlyvulnerable | 17-Oct-07/8:07 PM | Reply
Well I'm sorry they do
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