RION12
replying on Memories by RION12
9 Mar 2005, 7:44 PM
I know I suck spelling and all that other crap but for some reason I just fucken care. That's just me. I really don't care for much.
Ah, I'm getting you a lot more, now.
I like the idea. :)
I want to play with it myself, but will refrain until some inspiration strikes that allows me different words to rearrange.
Ultimately the idea is plum freedom. A hot walk is a determined walk, he has someplace to go but there's the fence issue.
The games are very limited . Ball on the end of a rope. Four squares (walls). I'll save the other words. I may need them later.;/
hmm thats nice.......though frankly i have know idea who you are, if you ever get a book let me know and i will check it out
-lia
cheerful (10)
(on a happire note my poem ALONE was published!!!!!!!yay!!!!!!!!0
Seeing lightning makes me feel far from anything I could comprehend knowing about. Even so, there is so much lightning created that it becomes increasingly less impressive, visually.
the_poetess
on Tales of Woah (Episode #1 Corp. Shin Shines) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
9 Mar 2005, 4:29 PM
alot of your work tends to be good but it is extremely long and exhausting to read - might i suggest making it a bit shorter - it would be more effective and i bet more people would read it
-emili
Nearly a decade of active practice on that, and I still hit the wrong tone sometimes. :)
Often on the ranker it's hard to tell whether someone's just taking a piss and waiting for you to try to take them too seriously.
i dont eat at mcdonalds
and i excersice
and my job currently is being educated, so i am offered the luxary of not having to put bread on the table
and i told you earlier, i often act pompous
-emili
you make a good point, and i will keep that in mind
thankyou for being able to criticize without being rude or negative.......
-emili
i am having issues with our government as well..
canada, huh, i actually have family there, but i've never met them
you have such a pretty name, just saying
-emili
of a tractor's or
of tractors'
nice but it would be that much stronger if you took off the "i think" tell us, don't speculate!
without that it would be a 5
with that change more of a 9
ill meet you in the middle and give you a 7
-lia
um, this was not, to be frank, very good
a) we all have a days work to do, and you weren't really compelling enough to make me think yours was special
2)it was rather bland and run of the mill
-lia
i really like this..........
-lia
Why don't you?
Of course you don't, otherwise you'd learn how to spell? Do you always come off as a pair of unworn chaps, or is that just your idea of a poetic haircut? See the problem with communism is simple, I don't like peasants, so why in the fuck should I support their lack of creativity, or individuality? I'd rather be a seperatist, or a fascist, and let them starve.
i might like this better if i didnt have a strong distaste for rhyme
-zarina
i really really like this!
-zarina
a tad to cliche to be really good
-zarina