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RION12 replying on Memories by RION12 9 Mar 2005, 7:44 PM
I know I suck spelling and all that other crap but for some reason I just fucken care. That's just me. I really don't care for much.
nentwined replying on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT 9 Mar 2005, 7:42 PM
Ah, I'm getting you a lot more, now. I like the idea. :) I want to play with it myself, but will refrain until some inspiration strikes that allows me different words to rearrange.
INTRANSIT replying on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT 9 Mar 2005, 7:34 PM
Ultimately the idea is plum freedom. A hot walk is a determined walk, he has someplace to go but there's the fence issue. The games are very limited . Ball on the end of a rope. Four squares (walls). I'll save the other words. I may need them later.;/
crooked_smile replying on bleeding by crooked_smile 9 Mar 2005, 6:40 PM
hmm thats nice.......though frankly i have know idea who you are, if you ever get a book let me know and i will check it out -lia
frdup717 on bleeding by crooked_smile 9 Mar 2005, 5:33 PM
cheerful (10) (on a happire note my poem ALONE was published!!!!!!!yay!!!!!!!!0
MacFrantic replying on Distance by MacFrantic 9 Mar 2005, 4:54 PM
Seeing lightning makes me feel far from anything I could comprehend knowing about. Even so, there is so much lightning created that it becomes increasingly less impressive, visually.
alot of your work tends to be good but it is extremely long and exhausting to read - might i suggest making it a bit shorter - it would be more effective and i bet more people would read it -emili
nentwined replying on A Nation by the_poetess 9 Mar 2005, 4:23 PM
Nearly a decade of active practice on that, and I still hit the wrong tone sometimes. :) Often on the ranker it's hard to tell whether someone's just taking a piss and waiting for you to try to take them too seriously.
the_poetess replying on don't know by the_poetess 9 Mar 2005, 4:21 PM
i dont eat at mcdonalds and i excersice and my job currently is being educated, so i am offered the luxary of not having to put bread on the table and i told you earlier, i often act pompous -emili
the_poetess replying on A Nation by the_poetess 9 Mar 2005, 4:19 PM
you make a good point, and i will keep that in mind thankyou for being able to criticize without being rude or negative....... -emili
the_poetess replying on A Nation by the_poetess 9 Mar 2005, 4:18 PM
i am having issues with our government as well.. canada, huh, i actually have family there, but i've never met them you have such a pretty name, just saying -emili
edpeterson on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT 9 Mar 2005, 4:16 PM
of a tractor's or of tractors'
crooked_smile on oops by jay_dace 9 Mar 2005, 4:01 PM
nice but it would be that much stronger if you took off the "i think" tell us, don't speculate! without that it would be a 5 with that change more of a 9 ill meet you in the middle and give you a 7 -lia
crooked_smile on My days work by lucky_cmc 9 Mar 2005, 4:00 PM
um, this was not, to be frank, very good a) we all have a days work to do, and you weren't really compelling enough to make me think yours was special 2)it was rather bland and run of the mill -lia
i really like this.......... -lia
<{Baba^Yaga}> on don't know by the_poetess 9 Mar 2005, 3:56 PM
Why don't you?
<{Baba^Yaga}> replying on A Nation by the_poetess 9 Mar 2005, 3:54 PM
Of course you don't, otherwise you'd learn how to spell? Do you always come off as a pair of unworn chaps, or is that just your idea of a poetic haircut? See the problem with communism is simple, I don't like peasants, so why in the fuck should I support their lack of creativity, or individuality? I'd rather be a seperatist, or a fascist, and let them starve.
i might like this better if i didnt have a strong distaste for rhyme -zarina
i really really like this! -zarina
whispern_smoke_wisp on Nitro by NNirvana13666 9 Mar 2005, 3:49 PM
a tad to cliche to be really good -zarina